|Reviews for Tholzagith: A Forgotten Tale|
| Monsignor Gabriel chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Your rhyme was rather off at many times, so I was wondering if you were attempting some sort of meter, which I'm terrible at detecting.
Otherwise, a classic tale, told in a classic manner, though a bit too impersonal. It's more something you'd find to give backstory to the fortress, as though you were writing the Legends, as opposed to having characters who lived them.
Again, though, I liked it.
| Whatsifsowhatsit chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Really enjoyed that. Excellent job!
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
WOW that was an amazing story :O
| Maker0914 chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
i have to say this is a nice poem