|Reviews for an empire thou couldst crush, command, rebuild|
| fierynightangel chapter 61 . 3/21
very cool chapter!
| jnotjane chapter 61 . 3/21
words cannot convey how much I love this. this is simply perfect.
| fierynightangel chapter 60 . 1/19
| Barranca chapter 60 . 1/14
Frigga being in accord with Loki in his animosity towards Odin is a scenario that neve occured to me, but it is interesting and credible enough.
| Ligeila chapter 59 . 11/19/2013
| ClaMiAl chapter 59 . 11/18/2013
Oooooh, nice! I wish this were the start of a longer fic. I would so love to see where this goes...
| Shriannan chapter 59 . 11/17/2013
If only it would happen this way in the movies.
Loki is so crafty and devious, as a trickster well should be. Thank you for writing!
| ClaMiAl chapter 58 . 11/1/2013
That was...sad. Though that bit about Frigga seeing a golden future for both Thor *and* Loki was kinda promising...
One suggestion, though: When talking about the Warriors Three, perhaps spell out the number instead of using the number '3'. I'm not sure why, but reading 'Warriors 3' was rather weird. Perhaps it's just me, but I'm not a fan of actual numbers being used either in dialogue or in descriptions. Part of it may be that when I say, for example, the number three out loud the word 'three' much better describes the sound I'm making, since I'm actually saying 'th', then the 'r' sound and then the 'ee'. And '3' just seems like...I dunno...a lazy shortcut or something? I really can't describe why it bothers me so much...
| fierynightangel chapter 58 . 10/31/2013
| silver ruffian chapter 58 . 10/31/2013
Sorry, I forgot to login. That Guest review was mine. I'll repeat it:
That was beautiful and heart-breaking. You really captured the relationship of Thor and Loki. No matter what Loki does, Thor still loves him.
| Guest chapter 58 . 10/31/2013
That was beautiful and heart-breaking. You really captured the relationship between Thor and Loki.
| ClaMiAl chapter 57 . 10/2/2013
Nice! I quite enjoyed those one shots, especially those that focused on Loki. And there were some that I would have loved to see expanded into longer stories. I look forward to whatever little snippets you come up with next.
| Guest chapter 57 . 9/18/2013
as said on the other one, awesome chapter.
| azure1996 chapter 40 . 3/15/2013
Loved it it was great
| jnotjane chapter 54 . 1/7/2013
ooooooh, I like this idea! so many possibilities. great ficlet that is sure to spawn more fics. it would be wonderful to see you write a long fiction based on this idea.