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purplepam chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Awesome...Really great...I love the way you write Orihime's POV!
RunningForward chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Very nicely written.
Everyone was in character, you conveyed Orihime's scatterbrained personality very well.
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Lovely, lovely Ichiruki..

I can't help it if I seriously enjoy seeing the Ichiruki love affair though Inoue's eyes. XD

I guess it seems the that spark is too great that everyone can practically see it.

Awesome writing skills by the way. XD
emichii chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
wow wow wow. such a tough idea to tackle and you did it with sensitivity and charm. :) i like that you really did orihime's POV well- especially the way she goes off on tangents and gets distracted. you made her sympathetic and told the story really well. :) great work!
great gospel chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
This was amazing. Honestly, it was one of the best Bleach fics I've read to date. You captured Inoue's personality perfectly. This line in particular, which cracked me up, was completely in tune with her character: "She'd wanted to be a super-hero monk and kill demons like that pervy one in the anime about a guy with dog ears that Chizuru-chan had made her watch, but without being perverted of course because Orihime doesn't think she'd do a very good job of peeping or looking up a lady's skirt, although—" And, though I'm not always so fond of her, I'm sure every reader's heart went out to her throughout the course of the story, as mine certainly did. But, sad as it may be, it was also a brilliant depiction of Ichigo and Rukia's relationship. Even from an alternate universe, everything that makes them Ichigo and Rukia and so perfect for each other was made clear. Inoue understands the depth of their bond and how Rukia is the only one that can affect him in such a way, and you showcased that fact excellently. Well done!

Serein Q chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
...Wow, that was amazing. I love the way you wrote Inoue, you captured her character so well-her silly fantasies about Ichigo were perfect, and seeing Ichigo and Rukia's bond through her eyes was great. Heartbreaking too, of course, but I loved it.
Bunie Boo chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
wow, that was amazing! very orihime-like, sooo good (: i loved the way you described ichigo's emotions. please do continue! xx
Mokimoki-chan chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Ichiruki is my otp. So happy you wrote this:)

Orihime POV isn't that bad either...

Just depressing at how the anime ended:"(

I like your writing style btw

I can relate to how Orihime is feeling..
pamianime chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Omg I really hope you do another part for this! You wrote it real well! Loved the angst coming from Ichigo, hope to read more soon!
TruantPony chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
This is excellent. You have a real talent for using Orihime's voice to capture all there is about Ichigo and Rukia. You've really captured Orihime's airy-ness, her whimsy, and you don't often see that in an IchiRuki-centric fic. Too often, IR authors discount her character, and how perceptive she is about the IR bond.

You managed to capture her character in a way that was very true to manga form. I felt that though she's perceptive, she doesn't understand Ichigo, who he is at the core, not really. She dreams and romanticizes about him, is fixated on him, but doesn't really KNOW who he is, and hence she can only sympathize, but not empathize. She doesn't know where he stands and so is unable to connect with him.

One thing that struck me is that throughout, you have maintained a tautness and tension, almost as if you can feel what Orihime is feeling, as if it hurts to breathe. The desperation in her to connect to Ichigo, to try her best, but comes short, is very real, very heartrending.

The way she sees them, who they are to each other is a fresh perspective on Ichigo and Rukia. What Orihime wants to be for him is ultimately unrealized because there is only one ray of light in Ichigo's life, and it is not her.

I liked how you drew the 'ray of light', the amulet metaphor throughout this piece, and the way you applied Atwood's poem throughout.

"In those three syllables is the talisman that Orihime has always wanted to give to Kurosaki Ichigo so very, very badly, because in that instance, for the very first time, she can hear no shadows in his voice." This is my favorite line in that it sums up three things in this scene- Orihime's desire, who Rukia is, and how Ichigo feels about her. Very effective.

Very nicely done! Overall there were very few mistakes- Ichigo, look at me/" backslash probably shouldn't be there. I couldn't find anything that detracted from the overall quality. The connection between the 'Why me sad' chapter was nicely done, very recognizable influence. Great job! I hope to see more stellar stuff from you!


wynnsy chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
Wow, this was so engaging. From Orihime's pov too! I really enjoyed it (it was brilliant). Orihime is the poor senstive soul that needs to witness every facet of Ichigo/Rukia bond in canon and here.
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Shubhs chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I actually felt sort of bad for Orihime here, though I loathe her in canon.

Good job.

RukiIchi is exactly the same in canon, aka, you just described their relationship and what it would be like if they both existed in the modern world, like it is.
shinjiru15 chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
This was so good! College AUs are so fun to read. It's interesting to try and see things from Orihime's pov... Anyway, thanks for sharing! If you have time/ motivation, sequels would be lovely :)
jiminy billy bob not logged i chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Brilliant stuff! I love ichiruki from the other character's POV. Especially orihime LOL. sequel, please? :D
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