|Reviews for In the Debris|
| helenemc chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
Things are starting to get a little complicated. Great chapter.
| jimemon chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
I had a lot of thoughts about the first section but as usual, Victoria wipes my mind clean. Grown up problems aside, she's so obviously still a teenager at heart. Great update!
| Maplestyle chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
I don't want Victoria to come on to Edward, or James to want Bella. I don't understand why James doesn't like Edward, why he thinks he wouldn't be good for Bella. Or was James just jealous? Can't wait to find out though.
| Scorpio11 chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
Oh my. Things are getting complicated and messy as their lives interweave more and more. It was good to get a little more background on James.
| Erikajo chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
So bleak. Great job! :)
| Capricorn75 chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
I can't get over how interesting and worthwhile you've made Victoria and James. Not just background characters, or simple shells. I already care about both of them, and worry about what will happen to them. I just want to take Victoria under my wing and help her out, be a friend.
| ginginlee chapter 4 . 3/27/2012
I'll reiterate how sad that ending gets me! Sigh. James and Victoria ... who knew I'd be a crazy shipper? And the E/B parts are perfect, I just love their interaction, though I'm still quite concerned about this line around Forks for Bella.
| Elizabeth Keller chapter 3 . 3/26/2012
Really good story! I can't wait to see where you take these characters!
| Noelluna chapter 3 . 3/25/2012
I think by now you know I love your stories! This one in particular has so much potential. Three chapters in and I am anxiously awaiting for more! There is already so much depth and truth to these characters. I was a little unsure about hearing from a character other than Bella or Edward. However, you have created a Victoria that is sweet and kind and hurting and vulnerable. Both her and Edward's stories have touched me and we still have more to learn about them. I am very curious about Bella and how her and Edward's relationship will progress. Job well done!
| HockeyChick10 chapter 3 . 3/22/2012
I want to be bookbuddies with Edward...and more lol. Victoria and James are actually really cute.
| reds-red chapter 3 . 3/22/2012
How very sad that she is afraid to kiss him since they were younger. She needs to just find the right time and do it. Love your BxE.
| AlexaC chapter 3 . 3/22/2012
Good to see some Edward/Bella interaction (book buddies, I love it!) though it does invite some questions about Bella's past, especially now we've heard some more about James's own difficult family situation.
It's a little sad that Victoria and James aren't a couple, which I assumed they were but at least they have each other even if it's only as friends.
| Kdub4127 chapter 3 . 3/22/2012
Wow, love it cant wait to read more, Im so supised I like the Vic POV most of the time I stop read a story if they change from E or B POV Im so glad I dint do that with this one I cant wait to read more I can tell this is just going to get better and better.
| anu1289 chapter 3 . 3/21/2012
Awesome chapter :)
| BilliCullen chapter 3 . 3/21/2012
the way you're writing all them is so intriguing.
I really like it.
I'm so looking forward to seeing more, where you take them, how they get there and what happens on the way.