Reviews for In the Debris
Ana83114 chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
I've been desperate to read something good since I have no patience for the in between of updates for ceanothus gloriosus (which I desperately love, I just wish I could binge read it now) so I decided to come back to your older stuff. Thank you for being so brilliant and letting us come back to old favorites.
Guest chapter 37 . 7/11/2015
First time I have ever liked Victoria and James in any story...loved this Edward and Bella too...thanks for a great read
Kickinl8tr chapter 37 . 5/27/2015
Wow this is not typically a story I would pick due to Victoria pov but I love it and the characters and their connections storie. Thank you.
meelee72 chapter 3 . 5/20/2015
E)
Aww, sweet that Edward mows Mrs. M.'s yard.
:)
I like this cheeky Bella.

'She wants to be book buddies?' - lolololol. Ah, I can see your confusion, young EdwardSon.
And he could not have given a more beautification description of her smile. -wow.

V)
I like Aunt Cheri a lot. She's a good lady. I like her simply for making Victoria feel loved.

"Donna Mills proper." - now, that's proper! Lolol. Nice one. Shows oFF our age. ;)

I like Victoria & James's little escape game, where will they go when school is out..

You spin such an inviting tale. I really love your style.
meelee72 chapter 2 . 5/20/2015
I am captivated.

These two brokenhearted souls...
I already know that this is my favorite Victoria. By far.
Your flow of movement, it just takes hold of me.

Vic's poems.. sweet girl. Such innocense from a littl one who has seen so much. She is still child like, and very endearing.

"Words that cut left the mouths of many. I covered my ears." ... that just made my heart ache.
I like the beginning of her and James' friendship... that was sweet of him.

I feel awful for what Edward endures.
I'm so excited about this new story dynamic.
meelee72 chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
Wow... This is already unlike anything I've read.
I've been a fan of yours, so I'm super excited to see where this goes.
So far, it's very intriguing, and with interesting dynamics.
Guest chapter 37 . 5/9/2015
Beautiful story :-)
Xx chapter 37 . 4/11/2015
Best history ever
Robela chapter 37 . 4/2/2015
I reed it again,i like it again,thank you!
JustARead chapter 2 . 2/27/2015
Sad
JustARead chapter 1 . 2/27/2015
Hmm curious how all characters play out
girlygirl0706 chapter 34 . 2/5/2015
Oh gawd...you're killing with a crying Edward.
girlygirl0706 chapter 32 . 2/5/2015
You made me cry with this chapter...like literally I could not hold the tears in. Sometimes when I come across a story that has an emotional chapter I will get teary eyed and the tears don't fall...but this one did. WOW.

I'm hating Carlisle in this one for doing that to his son and Bella.
Xerseven chapter 37 . 1/2/2015
I finally read this straight through after resisting, I admit, because of the Victoria/James reference in the summary. I'm an idiot. Beautiful, wonderful REAL characters. I laughed. I cried. Thank you for writing and sharing. Loved it.
AscotBella chapter 37 . 12/20/2014
This story was SO GOOD! Thank you for posting and sharing. It made me laugh, cry and everything I'm between.
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