Reviews for In the Debris
kat chapter 37 . 11/2/2014
I'm so glad I found your story, I managed to read it all in one sitting, I was so engrossed! I cried in almost every chapter haha but it's still become one of my all time faves, loved Victoria and Edward especially!
Tara chapter 37 . 10/11/2014
Wow, what an emotion filled story. Really enjoyed the journey, through thick and thin... wanted to hate Carlisle at times but every individual has their own view points from their own vantage point, great explanation and insight. Thanks for writing ;)
edward1932 chapter 37 . 10/3/2014
I really liked this story! I was not sure about James and Victoria at first but trusted you and your writing. You turned them into beautiful characters and I grew to care for them both. There were some good life lessons in there about assumptions and money.
Keep writing please! and Thank you!
Jennifer
Guest chapter 37 . 8/20/2014
Fantastic story! Brought so many laughs and tears. Thanks heaps for writing, you're very talented! Great balance of angst in here ;)
middlewife chapter 37 . 8/8/2014
Great ending. I'm a shipper but did love this James & Victoria.
The story blurb didn't grab me to begin with, but so glad I gave this story a go, was worth every minute xxx
middlewife chapter 36 . 8/7/2014
I'm kind of glad Mud is actually Victoria's dad. I know it has caused a lot of angst but it seems right that has lived the last 15 years with her true & devoted parents
middlewife chapter 35 . 8/7/2014
Drug addiction is such a sad, slow suicide. Watching a loved one go through it is hell. Even when you get to the point of realising you can't save someone doesn't make it hurt less
middlewife chapter 34 . 8/7/2014
So much going on in this one...my heart swelled at the image of Max & Edward playing guitar together.
middlewife chapter 33 . 8/7/2014
It would be a cruel kind of irony if Carlisle loved/loves Charlotte and is Victoria's father
middlewife chapter 32 . 8/7/2014
Feeling very sad now :(
middlewife chapter 31 . 8/7/2014
I understand Bella's feelings. I also understand Edwards. This toxic relationship between he & his father needs to end
middlewife chapter 30 . 8/7/2014
Awwwww, I'm so glad they have hearts that match. Even gladder that finally Victoria is someones special thing
middlewife chapter 29 . 8/7/2014
Did Carlisle pay Heidi? You think Heidi would have got the idea before now. Yes, he could have handled it better, but i don't think Edward ever gave her the impression that they were in a proper relationship. It sounds like they weren't even dating, just catching up for sex.
middlewife chapter 28 . 8/6/2014
I love Victoria's poetry and how it moulds her thoughts.
middlewife chapter 27 . 8/6/2014
I really love this James & Victoria. They have so much heart & a rare depth of feeling. I hope everything turns out for them. I really love James' life goal, cheesy as it is.
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