Reviews for In the Debris
RachelFish chapter 6 . 6/8/2014
That was a tough chapter to read! I don't want to see Victoria self destruct, and I certainly don't want her and Edward's confusion to lead them in the wrong direction. Reading on...
RachelFish chapter 5 . 6/8/2014
Good grief; you know how to draw emotion out of your reader! My heart hurts for James & Victoria. Hope you'll fix them soon.
RachelFish chapter 4 . 6/8/2014
I'm so confused by my feelings! My heart is so full for Victoria and Edward and even James. I don't want Isabella to complicate things! I want them all to be happy and not hurt!

Onward I go.

XO
RachelFish chapter 3 . 6/8/2014
Victoria, you vulnerable girl.

My heart hurts for her already, but what a beautiful chapter this was. XO

Rachel
RachelFish chapter 2 . 6/8/2014
So poetic, your writing. Hearing Victoria's side of things is new and different, and her words read somewhat eerie and dark-an added bonus; I dig it.

Love how this is building & climbing. XO
RachelFish chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Diving back in for a second read, and I'm just as hooked and pulled as I was the first time. You set up a first chapter wonderfully, lovely girl. XO
fuz chapter 37 . 5/29/2014
This was a beautiful and perfect reading experience.
I was amazed by your characters and their story.
Thank you for letting us read.
fuz chapter 36 . 5/29/2014
Something special!
Thanks.
fuz chapter 35 . 5/29/2014
Amazing! Thanks!
fuz chapter 34 . 5/29/2014
just perfect.
Thanks.
fuz chapter 33 . 5/29/2014
This is perfect.
Thanks!
fuz chapter 32 . 5/29/2014
Oh, what a perfect story.
Thank you!
fuz chapter 31 . 5/29/2014
Perfect story.
Thank you!
fuz chapter 30 . 5/29/2014
Fantastic!
fuz chapter 29 . 5/29/2014
Amazing!
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