Reviews for Stuck
Beckydaspatz chapter 3 . 3/18/2012
"Thought I'd…" coughing "…kick the bucket."

"Not today jackass."

A shaky smile.

"C'mon – baby's waiting."- PERFECT ending. I'm a sucker for baby and brother moments. Nice job!
Beckydaspatz chapter 2 . 3/18/2012
"If," sang a crazy little voice in his mind.

"If."

"IF."- I know you would never do it, but this made me stop and wonder how often that freaking 'if' bounces around in the boys head. Good chapter. :D
Beckydaspatz chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Ooooh ominous beginning! Sorry for the late review!
Dizzo chapter 3 . 3/14/2012
... and a happy ending; that's what we like!

'Tree and stone, deer and fox, man and other, long forgotten creatures – the swamp had swallowed them all. And never before had it been forced to give back what it had captured.' Yes, but it's never met the Winchesters before!

All through this I was getting flashbacks of thae scene from the Lord of the Rings trilogy where Gollum is leading Sam and Frodo through the Dead Marshes - great descrioption, you really took me there Kate!

Great job x
Dizzo chapter 2 . 3/14/2012
If, if, if, Sam's doubt is mocking him - that's a nice touch!

And the swamp - still and silent; I can totally picture it.
Dizzo chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Oh, will-o-the-wisps, nice monster of the week - I don't think I've read a story with those in yet!

Lovely creepy, swampy atmosphere :)
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 3 . 3/12/2012
Great drabble!
Spirit Burner AKA Chick Feed chapter 3 . 3/12/2012
Glad someone has played with will o the whisps, always thought a full length story could revolve around them as the supernatural entity. (Not that I'm hinting, obviously). :D

Chick xx
Edina Clouds chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
oh will-o'-the-wisps - nice idea, hun

Viv

xx
ccase13 chapter 3 . 3/11/2012
I like the drabble chapters. They tell a great deal of story.
mainegirlwrites chapter 3 . 3/11/2012
Very mysterious and creeeeepy! They totally need to do a swamp episode! Well done! Best, Randee
Amberdreams chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
And a LOTR feel to this one...
Amberdreams chapter 2 . 3/11/2012
Completely by accident. I'm reading these in reverse and have to say, they stand alone nicely! I liked this one a lot with the powerful repetition of Ifs.
Amberdreams chapter 3 . 3/11/2012
Great bit of tension ridden hurt comfort, Kate! Loved the fairy tale feel to the introduction.
DeansBabyBird chapter 3 . 3/11/2012
Hey Hunny.

Oh goodness he's all muddy isn't he? Right I'm packing my baby wipes, and a thermos of coffee and my blankie. You watch him till I get there, okay?

Bev xxx