Reviews for With death comes love
M-chanchen chapter 11 . 5/22
Hi,
this is really interesting. I enjoyed reading. Well done.
But there are just a few things that I noticed. First, mainly at the end of chapter 7 and 8 there were lots of writing mistakes. Maybe you could overlook it and correct the mistake.
Also, you very often wrote trun instead of turn.
And last, you switched the time sometimes, mainly you wrote in the past but some sentences you wrote in the present.
But besides from that it is quite good.
Do you still plan on continuing it?
galwidanatitud chapter 10 . 2/21
curiouser and curiouser...
galwidanatitud chapter 9 . 11/4/2015
Godric is such a romantic...in a dark and bloody way. ;)
belladu57 chapter 8 . 11/4/2015
Very good
galwidanatitud chapter 8 . 9/28/2015
Godric deserves the gift of Rebecca's blood and love. they are so sweet together. i guess her dream is saying that Eric is gonna be a day walker soon. or at least that's what i got from it.
galwidanatitud chapter 7 . 9/12/2015
aaawww. Godric is in love. and Rebecca's blood makes him a day walker. this is interesting. ;)
lunabloodmoon666 chapter 5 . 5/22/2013
i really like this and hope to read more soon :)
Coonkisser19 chapter 5 . 3/13/2013
i like it
WRose chapter 4 . 11/10/2012
she could spy on the fots
Miss Vampire90 chapter 4 . 11/10/2012
I love it :-)
musicluver246 chapter 3 . 11/5/2012
love this story.
WRose chapter 3 . 9/23/2012
poor thing
WRose chapter 2 . 7/27/2012
more
Meganiona chapter 2 . 3/17/2012
I love it, please update soon, :)
Hannah-Rampage chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
I really like this story so far. I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds. :)
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