Reviews for Understanding
PumpkinSpice0112 chapter 1 . 6/17
Now you've got me thinking. Noel is 18, Serah is 21.
But if you count the years they were born...that's a over 700 year age gap.
Guardian of the Goddess Etro chapter 1 . 6/6
Fanfiction understanding Final Fantasy 13-2 fanfiction you know as I was reading this fanfiction I can actually hear the characters from the game actually talking the way you wrote the dialogue it makes it sound like they themselves and smoke these lines this is a very believable Final Fantasy XIII fanfiction and I like I said before when I read the dialogue did you sit down I could hear the engine characters talking to each other almost like it was another part of the game that was left out of the game itself so for the sake of benefit whenever I play Final Fantasy 13 2 game I always think of this scene and pretend it's part of the game because that's how beautiful it was unbelievable now I'll let you go thank you for this wonderful fanfiction I'm glad to see those people out there to know what fanfiction is and what it's destined to be like you have a great Fourth of July and no spike in the fruit punch I got to go my cat's just summon Odin
17verse chapter 1 . 4/4/2016
This story is way too cute for words 3 I love it so much
Danko Kaji chapter 1 . 11/2/2015
It can be argued Lightning's a cougar, too, if Hope/Lightning is ever canon. So it runs in the family! :D (I see what you did there, Hope, avoiding the blatant/subtle existence of your torch for Serah's sister. :P)

Although Hope/Serah is cute in FFXIII-2, I love the thought of them as in-laws more. They could totally be brother and sister, both married to very heroic warriors. *hearts*
SkYeLiMiT chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
I love this little oneshot! I think Hope and the Farrons are just great with each other. Like brother and sister(s) :)
Jane St. Valentine chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
...Okay, I cave. I really don't like Noel/Serah, but I couldn't ignore the 'cougar' line in the summery any longer. XD

I loved it. I...suck at constructive criticism, so, this is all I can really say. (OTL)

Keep up the good work! *pumps fist, sweatdropping*
Lemonsnaps chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Hahaha I love this! I totally did not think of the fact that Serah was a cougar until I read it in your story! And I liked how you displayed the friendship between Hope and Serah. Awesome job! :D
Twilight Antediluvian chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
I love your Hope. Really, I do! And this Serah/Noel thing, it's so obvious and so fitting and, well, it just works so very well.

Because they fit, which Serah and Snow never had a chance to prove or disprove. Except he ran off, but that was for her sake, so it could be excusable.
xSapphireLightsx chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
I feel naively silly that I needed to google what a cockblock was . and then a cougar not long after. But I lol’d straight afterwards XD.

Daw I loved this! Just a simple oneshot on two friends having tea but it’s all so meaningful as well (I didn’t get the Elida Karmic part; so I’ll assume it’s something I’ve overlooked from the game) but the little conversations they were having, I could’ve imagined it like a cutscene.

That whole 'understands me' moment, wow Hope is perfect for stirring the bowl of Noerah love! He’s like an onlooker who won’t view harshly but simply believes in what is best for people…but not without teasing them of course lol.

Its funny Hope brought up Noel’s age, much like Snow did in the game. If you actually think about it between Serah, Noel is 3 years younger while Snow is 3 years older. Cough! Rivalry! Cough! But yes, Serah is definitely a cougar.

I think my favourite part was Noel walking in on the hand-holding thing and that look of suspicion he gave. Sleep with one eye open Hope, because you know how Snow said you were going be assassinated in 3 days? Yeah your bodyguard IS him! XD

Oh, new prompt! Why don’t you try something including Snow? I’d die to know how he’d react if some relationship did form between Noel and Serah. How would those three characters deal with it? (and did that other prompt I send get through? . tumblr is so strange)
sunflowerspot chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Lol Hope! I really liked the peek into his and Serah's friendship and the connection between Noel and Serah. _
Aeris1172 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
:D a asldkghls! Oh this was so cute. And Hope. Loved him in this. So lovely.
hihazuki chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
You brought Elida Karmic into the fray! That's a first. I bet you must be really interested in reading what all the fragments contain. I know for sure that I am; it makes me wonder about the life they lead other than the one we're shown. If they were to release more future episodes of XIII-2 as DLC, I'd like them to somehow put in tidbits of the characters' lives outside of story's focus, it's the little things that make them perfect.

In other words, the little details you put in your one-shot is what made it perfect and polished! I liked this very much! If only the Hope in the game were as outgoing and hilarious as this one.
anon chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
YES. THIS. noel's slight jealousy at Serah and Hope's intertwined hands and the growth that Serah had with Noel is just UGH YOU ARE ONE OF THE BEST NOERAH WRITERS EVER SERIOUSLY. never stop writing this pairing- all your stories are too beautiful. TT
AdequateNerd chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
I can't. All the build-up. I dunno why but I can't stop laughing xD Your writing is perfection!
Cinnamon Pink chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Ha! I agree, Hope is totally a cockblock. But a well meaning one. I loved his friendly affection for her in the game. I was worried he'd be on Snow's side and remind her she's got a fiance, but if she wasn't happy with Snow, I'm glad to see he'd be a supportive friend no matter what. Are you really a cougar if the guy is only 3 years younger? It's still a funny joke anyways, especially coming from Hope. Loved the Hope's humor, Serah getting caught in a lie, and Noel's unflinching tenderness toward her. I'm glad you didn't let this one keep collecting digital dust on your harddrive.
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