|Reviews for The Loose Tooth Caper|
| supercode chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
| IronAmerica chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Oooh, a new SE story? Cool.
Of course he is. And then there's Matthew and his favorite uncle... *snickers at both of them* Too bad it's just so darn cute.
Oh god. I remember having loose teeth at that age. Well, actually before, but that wasn't my fault. 'Nuff said there. *hugs Alexander* Poor kid. :(
Oh you two. I'd say get a room, but telling you to lock the door might work better at this point. *sighs* And then Orwell tempts Murphy. Jeeze.
*hugs Alexander again* Loose teeth are kinda scary! At least his parents can explain that to him without scaring the crap out of him. *glares in dad's direction*
Yes, siblings make this ordeal that much harder. At least mine didn't try for the toaster trick... Or hitting me in the face. Yeesh! Matthew! Would would Uncle Dominic say?
*snickers at Vince and Orwell* You two realize that Murphy hates you, don't you? *sighs*
Well, at least Alexander's problems are over. Good for him. :)
As for quibbles, it's just a few commas out of place or missing. Nothing major (well, aside from no Scales, but that's just me).
Lovely fic, sweetie.
| XxDeathStarxX chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Very nice! It's always enjoyable to see how the SE family is doing :)
Lol at "There was only one thing to do; go whine to mommy and daddy". That's so true, and parents must be prepared to solve these 'big' problems 24 hours a day. I hope for momma's boy's sake that our couple understands to lock the door when there's something more than a make-out session going on. Otherwise there could be some major - not to mention very awkward - explaining to do XD
It seems that Vince and Orwell are very good at using the little moments they've together efficiently. I like that :)
"You know, I dunno why they say that Hollywood girls are prettier than every day girls. I've got an every day girl right here who puts those girls to shame." Vince is obviously 100% right, but I could swear that I've seen one Hollywood girl who's as pretty as her :P