Reviews for Dark Side
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
I liked this syoty...right up until Jake cut her slack. Only a fool would do what Jake did here and Jake was no fool. Sorry but after the tone of the story Jake throwing himself under thye bus 10 minutes after Bella arrives just rings kind of ...silly? All that hard earned wisdom useless because ella deigns to show up. Sorry not workingl
Robin.D chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
wow that was good :):):):)
Guest chapter 1 . 5/31/2014
That just didnt feel ..right. I cant see Jake staying away all that time.. not wanting to deal with his own people and then just cgive in to the source of all his problems in 2 seconds. I think that after all that had passed Jake would just be...done with it.
Violent Gentleman chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
I was listening to Socco Amaretto Like by Brand New during the last few paragraphs and, holy shit, almost brought me to tears. Great job, I don't cry easily!
Jessy Rhian chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Love it still, so much. This is one I keep coming back to over and over xx
SagaDevotee chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
wow. that was a little bit disturbing. but then, what about the canon situation WASN'T disturbing?
i like how the ending was hopeful. well done.
AliMariexxx chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Wow! I loved this... shame it's a one shot, I really like to see what happens in her other visits! x
Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
you are the best author
wolfhappiness chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Is this a one shot? You definitely have enough here to continue. Love to see this extended.
kitty2lion chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
MelkiSihou chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Uhg! I detest one shots for one simple reason... There's rarely more to come. I would LOVE to read more. Please!
taoist elf chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
This was so creative! And I loved the emotions of the characters. Fantastic job. Thanks so much for writing and sharing.
Wolves Rule71 chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
hey girl it's San Juan chick. Love the story can't wait to read more. Glad to see Jacob's not falling like a sick puppy this time. And Bella is just a mess. Please post another chapter soon, pretty please with a cherry on top!


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tarapoynter13 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
I love it! Can't wait for more!
BabyGirl1910 chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Is that a "one shot?" please say there are more chapters to come
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