|Reviews for Rune Factory: Until the End of Time|
| ShinyEevee87 chapter 8 . 12/2/2014
I think you should just revise your chapters t fix what you messed up. I'm interested in this story and I would hate to see you give it up.
| Krow's Nest chapter 6 . 9/12/2012
Excuse me, Raven's with WHO?!
| Killertiger chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Can u please continue this.
| Janice chapter 4 . 5/29/2012
I love your story so far, it's really interesting, I hope you'll update soon :D can't wait for more! gambateh ! :D
| Pororing chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
Take this as a token of my thanks for reviewing my fic ;P You might want to mark spoilers, the ToD recap is one huge spoiler to those only familiar with the numbered ones.
Anyway, the plot has great potential. I do hope for twists and such, but one glaring grammar flaw that I saw was dialogue (ex. "Hi"he said) I dunno if it was a spacing error or not, but it should be typed as; "Hi," he said or he said, "Hi."
Do you know of Ushi No Tane? They pretty much do RF4 news and scans also revealed Ventuswill in full body ;D Good start, though!