Reviews for Son of a Snake
nightwing27 chapter 3 . 2/10
and my story the potters will tell all in the paper what they gay old fool is plotting good thing harry will have a massive army the gay old fool and tom and his girls have no chance
nightwing27 chapter 2 . 2/10
good thing in my story the potters will know that gay old fool wants their son dead and which he will fail the power of the jewel of life will destory darkness
anthony.pengelly.10 chapter 17 . 1/27
good hope for more
god of all chapter 17 . 1/17
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
ThatGalladeAcrossTheStreet chapter 10 . 11/4/2014
Hmm. Like the story, but don't like the unneeded sound effects. To be blatantly honest, they're annoying. Just saying.
loot chapter 10 . 10/11/2014
I enjoyed the premis of your story. Then I started reading it. You are writing cannon differently and changing basically nothing. I don't see the point you are still writing a dumb harry for no reason...sure he's "not james" oh wait he is. Wasn't sure if you'd get the sarcasm. Let's see the tear Hermione a new one and make her a true slave for betraying him. Let's see them destroy dumbles - he tried to destroy the potter fam for over a decade. Why the hell would you go to school at his stronghold...daphne is a flat character you are too focused on making cannon unsteady of using daphne and making your own story.
PotterFrkInTx chapter 7 . 10/11/2014
After reading your author's note a chapter or two ago, I finally looked at your last update and it says Sep. 7, which, at this point in time, is more than 2 weeks ago. Does this mean that you've passed away and are no longer updating, or that your life has gotten so hectic that you've not written anything more for this story? I guess only time ( and a response to this review ) will tell. Here's to hoping you're still alive and kicking!
guleria chapter 6 . 9/20/2014
about the Parvati Patil's prayer, she's a hindu and u as u noted described the islamic namaz. Parvati is name of a hindu goddess (Lord shiva's wife and Shakti's incarnation) and Patil is a hindu family name(a high caste i.e. the least muslim sympathetic group).
Hobbyfarmer chapter 14 . 9/11/2014
Great Chapter. Dumbles played on Hermione's weaknesses and this was believable. I also like your Harry.
Hobbyfarmer chapter 11 . 9/11/2014
i love this story even though I do not prefer Lily and Vampire.
Hobbyfarmer chapter 7 . 9/11/2014
I like the faith part for Pavrati. I have 3 friends from India, one Hindu, one Muslim and one Greek Orthodox. It is a diverse country.
Hobbyfarmer chapter 6 . 9/11/2014
Now I see. There is a mystery to how the protection of Harry worked. Great job. I love you list it has my favorites :)
Hobbyfarmer chapter 2 . 9/11/2014
Great chapter other than the time mistake. Unless Daisy was born before Sept 1 1981 she will be two years behind Harry.
Hobbyfarmer chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
I like the premise, but the hole love special magic thing I never liked, even from JKR. I will have to see if Harry still has the scare and why?
ob1292 chapter 2 . 9/10/2014
An interesting beginning I am eager to see how it will progress and what if any influence Sirius and Remus had on Harry's life and how being raised in a positive environment effects his decisions and future. Good Job
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