|Reviews for Symbiosis|
| Cyan Quartz chapter 31 . 10/13
Your fight scenes are amazing bro, I appreciate that not literally every attack is meant to kill, either. That was my only gripe with Sun Soul, It did fit the theme, but it was all super depressing.
| Cyan Quartz chapter 20 . 10/11
This episode tore my heart out, loved the action scenes in your version.
Team Rocket are starting to seem like Far Cry goons, you can kill a million of them but the only way to truly beat em is to go for their resources and utilities. Which is fun.
| Cyan Quartz chapter 1 . 10/4
Woah. Marp, got me crying.
| Guest chapter 42 . 4/24
After reading both Symbiosis and the rewrite, I feel like I have to say that Symbiosis is still better than Symbiotic, even though it starts getting bad at chapter 28 and even though I really liked the village arc in the rewrite, Symbiosis is still better and I'm really sad it will never be finished, despite disliking the last chapters of it.
I'm not sure why it's still better than the rewrite, but while the only part of Symbiotic I feel like re-reading is the secret village arc, I always re-read Symbiosis entirely, even those chapters at the end that I actually dislike, I wish I could pinpoint and explain why, but even though it became a mess by the end Symbiosis is still great! Thanks for leaving it up, it's the best pokemon story, even unfinished, if you still have the notes for what was going to happen next in this story it'd be great if you could post it, if not it's fine, I'm glad the story is still up so I can re-read it when I want :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2021
A very good Pokemon fanfiction but ash is too innocent but thanks it is one of the best fabrication ever
| Resurrection99 chapter 14 . 1/15/2021
| GrumpyGrue chapter 1 . 10/13/2020
Weedle weeds out weaklings.
| hobbes319 chapter 14 . 8/30/2020
the trio is surprisingly badass
| Valkyrie3420 chapter 6 . 7/16/2020
Oh gawds, first in the anime, they try to recruit pikachu, and now ASH into TEAM ROCKET?
| erica.phoenix16 chapter 42 . 12/3/2019
Looking forward to the write up. :)
| Dragonmaster150 chapter 32 . 12/2/2019
I know that you've already finished this a long time ago, but given Jessie and James' attitude towards "the Good Guys" I'm kind of waiting for the other shoe to drop when find out that their entire organization is practically made up of "Good Guys". That's probably going to be a shattered worldview right there.
| JoshPlater chapter 26 . 12/1/2019
Haven't finished reading the chapter yet, but Lucas is Giovanni's son isn't he. He ran away from his facist family who then became Team Rocket. It seems like a likely option.
| VampireApple chapter 14 . 11/26/2019
I have been excitedly reading through this story and not leaving reviews, but this chapter was so cool. I love the darker themes, I love the violence, I love how you explain Rocket members motivations and how varied those motivations are, I looove Jessie and James too! How they were in this chapter made me want to review.
I love how the other Rocket member refured to them as the crazies. Their talk about pamphlets in an earlier chapter was so funny to me! I like how they're so competent too. Jessie just casually broke that person's arm then they just killed the humans, and went back to watching the movie! Amazing.
And, holy shit, what you've done with Ash's character, I love it. Same with Brock and Misty. You've changed these characters to fit this new world, but you were able to keep the core of who these characters were.
The sneaky humor in here too, I love it!
This world is amazing. It feels like a great blend of the managa, Pokemon Adventures, the anime (some parts remind me of Pokemon Origons) and the game. Your battle scenes are amazing, the strategies are awesome, and the research you must put into this for pokemon moves...
Just. Just stellar. This is one of the best AU fics I've ever read in any fandom. Simply amazing.
| RandomRamune chapter 10 . 11/6/2019
So I saw the rewrite and had to read the original and you’ve done an excellent job! I love the characterizations of the pokemon, especially pikachu and butterfree. Team Rocket being competent but still not totally evil is well done, I can imagine the narrator going, “And will James ever get to show his powerpoint? Stay tuned!” I’m looking forward to reading this story and the rewrite, thank you for this excellent story!
| Paulthored chapter 30 . 10/27/2019
"... personality, and power power."
? Would you have just wanted one power?
Or did you mean something else, like physical power?