I absolutely love this story. Everything about it appesa to me, from the way the pokemon act to the way Ash is because of how he was raised. I cannot wait to see where you go with this story. I'd offer to beta, but I'd be terrible. I wish you the best of luck

Bravo! Finally a pokemon story writer that can use ordinary pokemon with real skill. I love the plot and your writing structure is great. Keep up the updates, it would be a shame if such a good story would end prematurely.

I really enjoyed reading this and I'm looking forward to more. The story is written very well and to my knowledge this is a somewhat original idea. Can't wait to see where you take this story.

Interesting.

Parent's killed right off the bat and apparently Ash will be raised ala Mowgli from Jungle Book.

Definitly watching.

Nice, usually people tend to take out Ash's past in tragic fics, or generally gloss over them. It's refreshing to see a whole chapter, and a well written one at that devoted to the prologue.

...Eh?