I want that badass Weedle on my team.

You know Onix is spelled with an 'i', right?

Oh, it's a murder mystery section. Also, I love how much the Great War happened in this. Other fics don't even brush over it.

This is fantastic!

So I was reading this in my head's normal internal reading voice (we all have one) but when I got to this bit, "ចង្អុលឲ្យដើរផ្លូវកណ្តាល មាគ៌ាត្រកាលអាចកំចាត់ ទុក្ខភ័យចង្រៃអោយខ្ចាយបាត់ អាចកាត់សង្សារទុក្ខបាន។" it just turned into static, like at the end of a video. Also, DARK.

EVERYONE IS HERE I am waiting for Team Flare and Team Plasma and that is it

That last sentence...sigh. Ash, when will you ever learn? This is just as bad as 'what could possibly happen to make things worse?'...

She is probably going to end up being a relative of Jessie's. I'm so excited to see all the backstory they'll uncover! XD

I'm more than willing to help in any way I can, love the chapter! XD

I'm just hoping his parents don't turn out "evil."

He's going to be so traumatized after this that I doubt he'll ever reveal his secret, poor thing.

If the kid is "no older than five," and he went missing five years ago, doesn't that mean he somehow fell as a less than one year old infant? I highly doubt he'd remember his given name, let alone respond to it. :/ Also, where was this "automatic parachute" attached to? Because of his age, shouldn't he have been strapped to his parents? Regardless, love the chapter!

p.s. Have you seen/started playing the Pokemon Go app? It's so much fun! XD

Your writing is brilliant, and I love what you've done with this chapter! XD

I have enjoyed this fic so far as the info and work put into it is amazing and fun to read.

I have my own Pokémon poll and Fanfiction up that need looking at; would you consider taking a look as I need the reviews and votes on my poll.

I literally was LMFAO at the part with Pikachu and Surge's female Raichu.

I was for sure she was gonna try and mate with him right there and then since she was so amorous with him.