Welp, guess I gotta wait another year or 2 until you release symbiotic Kanto and then keep going further into Ash’s journey to pokemon master. as a suggestion that you by no means have to listen too, give Ash some more pokemon or interactions with wild pokemon, or something, idk. I wanna say you should make Ash atringer but I understand he was weak on purpose because he’s a 10 year old who’s never dealt with the real world before and he wasn’t going to become badass in a single year. So I just hope that you get far enough into the sequal that we do see Ash get stronger or as strong as misty and brock. Also do not scrap Jessie and James they are my favorite characters in this story and they are perfect. Good luck

When James joined team rocket to fight the good guys but the people who he called good guys actually helpes run team rocket the entire time.

noooo I wanted Ash to lose for once and see the power point presentation.

I have never wanted Ash to team up with Jessie and James so badly in my entire life...

I've read through to 29 so far, and just wanted to let you know that you have inspired me to make my own Pokemon Fanfiction. The main character being a Zoroark that was born in the Kanto region, and is the only one known to the world. He tries to learn how to blend into Human civilization, and creates a Human Illusion form, aka N from Pokemon black and white.

But I just wanted to let you know that your work inspires others too. And I am still reading your story so far, and have loved it the whole way! Keep up the good work!

Ash’s one true weakness: Psychiatrists.

okay, well Jessie abd Jame’s story is super fucked.

in light of the new detective pikachu movie I want to say this pikachu sounds like it’s played by Ryan Reynolds.

Ash age 13, going through pubertyLeave me alone Poison Lance you’re just a stupid weedle. You’re not my real dad and you can’t tell me what to do. What kind of name is Poison Lance anyway, it’s so stupid. You’re so stupid!”

"What's mating?"
"When two people love eaOh, sex."
A bit too blunt there Aaron/Ash

Even though you don't intend to continue this story, know that I really enjoy it and that the concept of a feral Ash made his character tons more likable and I adore all the extra lore and concepts you've added.

Be proud of this project, even if it got fumbled in the end. This is some quality stuff!

Why the bike? Seriously, that is your reason to have misty come with them. Lame

Is there a romance in this story?

Holy shit! Team Rocket is batshit crazy and this is a very different take on how they are normally portrayed. Iv'e always been fond of Team Rocket being more competent than they look

Now I remember why I stopped reading this story back then. It got dark and edgy and that wasn't what I was looking for then but it is now. I like this