Reviews for Picnics and Rain
Anonymous chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
Its really good I suppose as a M rated novel also I started to read Living the consequences and thats harsh man either way I really liked it plz try to finish this one
chaosalien chapter 2 . 4/22/2012
I really like your story dude, you really captured both naruto and hinata characters, and I feel a lot of fics fail to capture hinatas character, I really hope you continue this story even if its just something your not serious about. I'm going to favorite and follow this story in hopes you will be inspired to keep writing.
TwiceMarked chapter 2 . 4/20/2012
Really like how it has gone so far. I look forward to seeing more.
dragonball256 chapter 2 . 4/19/2012
Not to bad a chapter, though I sense many humorous situations Hinata can get into wearing Naruto's clothes around the village :D
Chewie Cookies chapter 2 . 4/19/2012
Very nice. I seriously hope to see more soon, but if you can't update soon-ish, that's fine. Real life happens, man.

Keep up the good work!
Rose Tiger chapter 2 . 4/19/2012
How cute! Keep going!
Solvdrage chapter 2 . 4/19/2012
Adorable. Loved it
hinatasgreatestfan chapter 2 . 4/19/2012
Interesting...very interesting. I'll be looking forward to more of this.
ApexPredator chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
I think that the beginning was really unique and well done. I wouldn't mind seeing more chapters of this but it works great as a one-shot too.
Apex Soldier chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Awesome and very fluffy story...

For a second there, I thought this was going to turn into a lemon (which wouldn't have been a bad thing)...

I love the way you wrote this and got my own muse pumping now (finally -.-)

I'm sorry about your grandma and I hope for the best...

Good luck with whatever...
hinatasgreatestfan chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I have to point out this error, it's the only one I've seen so far. "Se was sitting in the lap of the man she loved". Se? Please fix that. Other than that, excellent one-shot, though you might want to mark it as complete if this IS in fact a one-shot. Anyway, good fluff, very cute.
Chewie Cookies chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
God, that's

Keep up the good work!
Solvdrage chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I'm curious to see how you can continue this one. It works fantastic as a oneshot. I really enjoyed it. Everything flowed well. Definitely an enjoyable read.
Twilight- The Moon Spirit chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
This was quite on the unique side and I loved it alot xD
Mulleb chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Hinata, how in the world to you get yourself in this position? I know how but still... Great chapter by the way. Hope you update soon.
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