Reviews for Princess Jasmine & Aladdin Together Alone
No Name chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
I'm an anonymous flamer (yes we exist.) And if you know what a flamer is, be prepared. I'm here to talk shit about you and your stupid ass fic. You shit faced ass crack.

What the fuck was this? Pathetic loser. How dare you write something like this?! You sick fuck. Let me guess, you imagine fucking cartoon characters and love watching child porn?

Why disgrace such a wonderful movie and it's characters with your barb wired brain? You need to get a life you child predator.

This was written horribly and you clearly fail at setting any mood. Don't count the ass eating sickos who enjoyed this. What you thought the readers would praise this utter crap? Thick again you lonely bastard.

You suck, your fic sucks and you need to seek counseling. Dumb bitch.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
Constructive critisism: work on the point of view, it should reduce any confusion
Evie chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
AutumnRainLM chapter 1 . 9/12/2015
You put Tiffany instead of Jasmine.
SweetToothForLife chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
who is Tiffany
Nico Di Angelo101 chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Tiffany? WTF?
Angel chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
...why would you add your name into this? Isn't this about Jasmin and Aladdin why is your name mentioned? "Tiffany" If I was Jasmin I would of killed him as sson as I hear a name that isn't mine.
Mermaidsintheolympics142 chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Please look at what you've written. Now go and watch the movie. Now come and look at what you've written. See the difference? "Tiffany?" Is that an OC, a friend, yourself? And I know you've heard this before from other readers, but I am 110% sure that there are no showers at that time. It's not all bad, you just need to work on the technical stuff.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22/2014
That...was awful! O_O (Tiffany?)
LW12 chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
wow, this is so cool. but who's tiffany?
SchoolGirl123 chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Wait a second, did I just read Tiffany!?
YUNOWRITEWELL chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
This was a joke, right?
I cant even begin to describe how bad this was. I mean, aside from the total disregard for any type of substance whatsoever, you took every ounce of personality from these two beloved characters and turned them into cheap pornstars with extremely vulgar language. And dont get me wrong, I can always appreciate a good smut as long as its well written, but this was utter crap. Classless, tasteless, horribly written, and just a complete horror in general. To be honest, I really dont care if you find this harsh, because if you read this review and think to yourself "Well now theyre just mean!" Then take a look at the passage in which Aladdin calls Jasmine "Tiffany" . -_-
I read your profile to see if this was a legit story and not just a dummy acount, and it says youre 21, which I really doubt. If you are, then please, dear, stay away from writing for a while, okay? Just...please. Ugh.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Very OOC, unfortunatley. I can always appreciate a good smut as long as it is well written, but I have to say, I was quite disappointed with this. Maybe try adding some of the characters' personality or some semblance of a plot, because this seriously reads like an overly racy romance novel.
Yopeoplehi5 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
yeah cool
Awesome1234 chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
OMG this is so sweet!I wish they put that in the movie.
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