Man, I cried. Then I read your authors note and cried again. What a lovely story about change, thanks for sharing

Im back reading this for a second time, it is truly a wonderful story. Im so sorry for your loss, I wish a lot of understanding and strength to you and your loved ones.

well that was quite the storyit's sad to see that we likely might not get an update for quite some timebut I'm still grateful for having the 11 chapters that you did provide. I love your depiction of Genin Team 7, especially Sakura with how you've balanced her more childish traits against her mature traits. I would love to see this story progress so that we can watch Sasuke develop and become closer to his teammatesso I hope this story gets updated someday! 3 you truly did a fantastic job, despite all the hardships you were experiencing IRL while writing. I wish you all the best in life!

Hello,
I wished to thank you for your stories, I really enjoy reading them. I also read about your loss. I'm sorry you had to suffer again. I'm sending lots of love to you. Get well and, if you have the time and the heart to write again, know that there are people enjoying your work.

How are you? Please update!

Hey! My deepest condolences for your loss, I hope you're well and that you've been able to feel a little better since then.

In regards for the fic, I completely understand if you decided to abandon it, but I must say that I really enjoyed the idea and the way it was being executed. I hope you'll consider maybe returning to finish it, I'd love to follow it until the end. You write really well and I could feel all the emotions you were trying to portray! The foundations for the future chapters are also super strong and made me look forward to them. Anyway, thank you for sharing your work up until now.

All the best!

I'm so excited for the next chapter!

So far so good! Okay now with foreknowledge I hope Sasuke can start being an asset to Konoha especially during the chunin exams. I’m trying to figure out how future Sakura possessed genin Sakura and I hope she’s watching Sasuke do things different. But it doesn’t seem like older Sakura’s wholly in control to be an asset but only a silent spectator? Yet she has influence over little Sakura? It seems genin Sasuke seems to still be a bit present in his body as a spectator too as future Sasuke is taking the reigns. That’s a lot going on in their minds and in the fic. Hope it makes sense soon! I kind of feel bad for these genin who are being possessed by other people from another universe lol straight up losing their entire will to think and mature on their own.

I’m liking the changes! Kaka POV for the win.

I’m glad you’re adding new things to make the standard plot more interesting.

Your writing and the unicorn’s edits are amazing. Very cool concept. I’m excited to see where it goes. Reading from Kakashi’s POV is always hilarious when author’s get him right lol and you did!

I wonder how Sasuke is going to fair and wonder when he’s going to use his foreknowledge for “good,” right? Dun dun dun.

I was dying to see a travel time fic with sasuke's point of view thank you so much for giving me this ️

this fic is trully amazing, i hope everything is fine to you and you will update one day

I hope your family is doing ok now

Espero la continuación adoro el sasusaku y tu historia me tiene enganchada