Oh my God...no, Sakura CANNOT be dead! I think you did well to go dark so Sasuke finally opens his eyes and reconsiders his beliefs. Gosh poor Inari... what happened to the poor kid?

I would love more updates on this! They are always soo good!

Abd Happy New Year btw!

update soon please

love it!

Oooh, Sasuke’s finally getting slapped with reality. I liked this chapter a lot, great job!

I think this is a great story. I like time-travel fics to begin with, but they tend to jump into fixing everything that went wrong. You’re taking your time with Sasuke, and it makes perfect sense. (I do wish, however, that you didn’t go through canon events at a snail’s pace). I also really like how you write Kakashi—he’s still hopeless as a teacher, but he has to react differently because Sasuke is acting differently, so you’re not just rehashing all the things he does in the original timeline. Overall, great story!

Thanks so much for updating! Love this fic and can't wait to see where it goes!

LOVE IT

i...wow. you really hit me in the gut with this chapter. hoping in vain that sakura isn't dead but...
idk. i hope you are proud of this chapter because it's amazing and powerful and just so damn well written. thankyou so much for writing this! looking forward to wherever this one goes 3 :")

i am d edge of my metaphorical seat. this is stunning 33

Oh my God I am loving this trajectory! Sasuke realizing that he's a selfish prick whose actions has consequences to those around him is SUCH A GOD-TIER ROUTE! I LOVE IT! NARUTO AND SAKURA'S FRIENDSHIP IS ALSO SO GOOD! I'm excited to see what Sakura's actions would mean in the long run for the team! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! Truly a joy in the middle of this dumpster fire year

Oh wow this went some unexpected places! Poor Inai and Tsunami. Hurry and wake up Sakura, you've got people to save.
Now we just need Naruto to regsin his memories and the ball can really get rolling.
Cant wait to see what happens next! :)

Thanks for sharing.
Stay safe.

Also yes windows 10 sucks!

Whoa… I totally forgot about Inari and Tsunami…! I thought there was something missing, when Naruto went to the bridge with Team 7, instead of sleeping over that… It’s confusing me though. What happened to Inari! Is he dead? Or is he not? Ugh… it’s great that this has a great impact on Sasuke. I thought he wouldn’t care about them, since he didn’t even care about Sakura and Naruto, when they went to face their death…
I absolutely loved the parallels between Sasuke and Zabuza, all those flashbacks from his previous life, that really touched me. I liked that it turned rather dark again, I mean there was never a really happy-go-lucky atmosphere with brooding-Sasuke around, but yeah, it was more carefree in-between I guess. I’m excited to see how you’re going to further develop the story! When Sasuke gets his Sharingan back, how his relationship with Sakura’s going to change, and what more you have in store for us!
Thank you for this brilliant chapter! I’ll wait patiently for the next one!
Bye~ Ame

I never new I needed this - this kind of shaken up Sasuke actually witnessing Zabuza and Haku's tragedy start to finish. Him being so desperate and lost. Him facing the full consequences of his actions and not trying to run away from them, like usual.
This was - for lack of a better word- absolutely amazing. Thank you for writing one of the most impactful scenes I've ever read.
Now I only wish I got to see this kind of Sasuke in the original.

YAAAAS, the angst is amazing haha
Ok,I love that Sakura demolished Haku's mirrors with Sasuke's body. And her being the one to take the senbon for Sasuke? And Sasuke starting to realize and remember what it means to fight for someone else? Beautifully written, I loved it all!
But you didn't kill Sakura! You couldn't have, I refuse to accept it. I mean she had a dream that suggested that she be more careful around Sasuke, implying that there would be more interactions with him, right? Are we going to see a flip on her personality the way Sasuke is starting to change? I hope she doesn't become too cold after this, but tbh I don't blame her if she does. Sasuke was a major asshole.
Thanks for updating!

I re-read this, and it felt like a distant dream, but it all came back so fast and I got so excited because, wow, I love this! Your writing style is so colorful and rich, and I love how you get in each character's head so we get a well-rounded, and different view, of familiar events. I'm absolutely looking forward to reading more about what's going on!