YAAAAS, the angst is amazing haha
Ok,I love that Sakura demolished Haku's mirrors with Sasuke's body. And her being the one to take the senbon for Sasuke? And Sasuke starting to realize and remember what it means to fight for someone else? Beautifully written, I loved it all!
But you didn't kill Sakura! You couldn't have, I refuse to accept it. I mean she had a dream that suggested that she be more careful around Sasuke, implying that there would be more interactions with him, right? Are we going to see a flip on her personality the way Sasuke is starting to change? I hope she doesn't become too cold after this, but tbh I don't blame her if she does. Sasuke was a major asshole.
Thanks for updating!

I re-read this, and it felt like a distant dream, but it all came back so fast and I got so excited because, wow, I love this! Your writing style is so colorful and rich, and I love how you get in each character's head so we get a well-rounded, and different view, of familiar events. I'm absolutely looking forward to reading more about what's going on!

Love your stories. Thank you for writing them 3

nice

wow this chapter is amazing, so mess coz sasuke? dunno long time no read, i forgot. but I glad u countinue this story. thank u for update.

well damn...i hope sakuras ok. This is beauuutiful tho, like holy hot heck how can someone write this good. Anyways i would love to see the next updatr soon. Kinda scared buh like...i wanna kno. Pleese ples work on completing this. Its too good to be left hanging

I think Sasuke is way past understandably stupid here. I understand his emotions, but he shouldn't be this needlessly strategically retarded. I think the angst is over the top .

Thank you so much for the update! I haven't seen many Sasuke time travel fanfics, unless they are team 7 stories. I love Team 7 and SasuSaku, but it's refreshing to read his perspective as someone who hasn't already returned to Konoha and re-established his bonds, to get a better idea of how the missing-nin Sasuke would react to suddenly being thrust into the past and onto Team 7. I wonder if when Sakura wakes up she will have memories of the future since she heard her older self. I actually like the darker spin but I hope that Inari and Sakura are okay...however I agree that with the way Sasuke was, he needed something extreme to change his mind. My thoughts are that the first time around he got his sharingan during the fight because he wanted to protect Naruto, not because he wanted to win or get power. Whereas this time he saw Sakura as a nuisance/hindrance and his goal was to get the sharingan to get stronger not to protect. Can't wait for the next chapter. Take care and stay safe.

Oh to see ones ego crumble at their feet.

I stumbled in this story recently and I am loving it! I like how you’re carefully changing canon but keeping true to how the characters might react in these circumstances and just...it’s amazing! Update soon!

Ths was brilliant and I am crying. *sigh*

omg I’m crying T.T your writing is beautiful and this chapter was perfectly written

Everything is worse and I kinda love it. Has inner-Sakura been replaced by Sakura the time traveler 'cos it feels that way to me?

I LOVE your writing. Such beautiful imagery and the way your portray Sasukes thoughts too! Haha I actually reread your story for the 3rd time—it’s just that good!

Loved it!