|Reviews for Mass Effect 3: Cataclysm|
| Kingdark chapter 2 . 2/18
"I may have said the same to Javik, but I' written over a dozen studies on the Protheans species, I've published in several journals and- - If you meant I've instead I alone then written is technically right I think. But If you meant to write I alone then 'wrote' is the correct form to use. Though I do think you meant I've instead of I alone, I figured that by mentioning it you may realize that you forgot a letter or that you made a mistake. Either way it helps.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
Wow, this opening is awesome
| Illuviar chapter 5 . 12/4/2013
Yeah this will be an interesting cycle :D
| Illuviar chapter 4 . 12/4/2013
Great work so far!
| l3loodKnight chapter 5 . 12/2/2013
Will the other 7 be making a appearance garaa, fu, bee? (Can you imagine bee rapping with your style of characters he would just assume people were to primitive to understand his rhythm or people would just shot at him javik included XD)
| KingLoitl chapter 5 . 11/27/2013
update this plz
| Culaio chapter 5 . 11/26/2013
Very interesting fic I really enjoy reading it :), I like how naruto is badass but I am kinda dissapointed how he looks down on other races.
I like how Naruto's and Liara's relationship is going even though its going a little too fast, also maybe you could use the stuff that Javik mentioned in citadel DLC: Javik mentions that Proeteans didn't "date" primitive races...unless they were asari XD, then he says that Liara has no idea XD.
Keep up the GREAT work :D
| Alex the Digital HellReaper chapter 5 . 11/24/2013
Hahaha I can't wait to see naruto on a date. His expression will be priceless.
| Pain4ever chapter 5 . 11/23/2013
I look forward for the next chapter
| Partsu chapter 5 . 11/23/2013
this must be attempt to troll us readers...this feels too much like crackfic to be serious...
| Cf96 chapter 5 . 11/22/2013
| tyog56 chapter 3 . 11/22/2013
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/22/2013
Awesome chapter, I hope to read more of this story soon!
| SPark681 chapter 5 . 11/22/2013
Hmm this seems its gonna be very interesting soon wonder how this will turn out anyways keep up the great work!
| Markus-Antonius chapter 5 . 11/22/2013
Fun chapter! Can't wait for more yugito!