|Reviews for Four Little Words|
| SydneyAlice chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Good luck in the contest!
| jmcfall chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Thank you so sweet !
| abstract way chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
What a lovely story. It was so sweet that their first date was at a Chinese restaurant and then later he creatively had the proposal baked into her fortune cookie when it was time to propose. I love that it was not an over the top proposal, but sweetly romantic and very fitting for them.
That sounds like the kind of proposal I would have really liked. Great job!
| mslizabeth chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Awww...I loved it. He was so sweet. A very adorable proposal for sure. :)
| TKegl chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
Oh, that was so cute. Love the fortune cookie detail - so sweet! good luck in the contest!
| afonz chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
This was very sweet! I liked the way Edward proposed. The fortune cookie thing was very clever and was a good nod to their first day.
The way that Edward and Bella met was precious.
I also enjoyed the fact that this was told in an EPOV. Most of the entries I've read are told in BPOV (apart from the 3rd person entries) It was a nice to see a change.
Best of luck!
| Kapriiwhoosh chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Fortune cookies are also my favorite part of the meal hehehe. Nice story :)
| gmd028 chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
How cute :)
| DaniWithGreenEyes chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
awwwww that was really sweet! i smiled through the whole thing, my cheeks hurt hahahaha it was a very thoughtful and special proposal, i really liked it!
| Packy 2.0 chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
So very cute hun. I love the whole fortune cookie thing. Made for a great intimate moment between the two. The fact that he took that element from their first date & integrated it into his proposal was very sweet and made it all the more special in the end.
Very great entry babe and best of luck in the contest!
| ordinary vamp chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Oh, what a cute little one shot! I loved the fortune cookie part - a sweet touch. Good luck in the contest.
| edwardsfavoritebrunette chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
I'm kind of glad Bella didn't seem too surprised. It seemed like a natural progression in their relationship. The fortune cookie is always cute :)
| tawelephant chapter 1 . 3/12/2012