Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us. I have to admit that the first few chapters were incredibly harrowing and I'm glad you gave the six chapter warning. The rest of the story is fantastic, I especially love your character personalisation.

I know this is an Edward Bella story but I LOVE Jaspers character in this story too! Well done

I loved It! Like really really enjoyed it. Thank you for such a good story and world building.

I lurked through the whole fic without leaving a review before this, but I couldn’t not share what a fantastic story this is. It’s original and compelling. Thank you for your words and putting it out in the world, it was truly fantastic

I loved it absolutely. The characters were amazing and I couldn't stop reading. Congratulations thanks for sharing. Regards Toni

so Edward can read her mind/ that's different and will most likely freak her out.

my god, what are your dreams like? this is horrible but I want her to escape!

that was awful.

Daaaamn. Charlie really is a badass!

Way to go Charlie! Hahahaha! This chapter is my favorite so far!

I've been listening to this since morning, I just couldn't stop and I am grateful for the 6 chapter warning, not sure I would have kept it up otherwise. Totally worth it and so amazingly written!

Absolutely PERFECT! WOOT AND SHINY! HUZZAH!

OMGOSH! I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS STORY!

Omgoodness! THAT. WAS. MOST. EXCELLENT! WAY TO GO, CHARLIE!

I am SO LOVING THIS STORY! I've startled my dogs at least twice with gasps and cackles!