|Reviews for a different possibility|
| Wolfman613 chapter 15 . 3/24
Please write next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
| nemesisswan chapter 1 . 6/13/2014
There is this magical thing called Ortography - you need it more than writing poor stories.
If you had cared about the grammatic A LITTLE, I wouldn't have written this rude truth.
| herart chapter 7 . 1/15/2014
Well, so far this chapter is half the story and is centered in the philosopher's stone.
Just slightly AU. Not my type of reading.
| Pfft chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
This is ridicules, get your grammer checked.
| sjstaudt chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
Work on sentence flow. "You acted with hate" just doesn't sound right. Also you didn't have any meaningful conversations or character development happen on the train ride.
| Penny is wise chapter 15 . 8/1/2012
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/30/2012
A more human side.
| ceo55 chapter 15 . 7/30/2012
Voldie is moldy, with the soul anchors he has lost most of his humanity so he is a spiteful extremely confident and sly so moldy is a good term from my point of view!
| flight.of.the.phoenix.86 chapter 15 . 7/30/2012
U should show more of a human side of Voldemort!
| Penny is wise chapter 14 . 7/7/2012
| flight.of.the.phoenix.86 chapter 14 . 7/7/2012
| god of all chapter 14 . 7/7/2012
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
| Lady Elizabeth of New York chapter 3 . 7/6/2012
Really? I mean really? This is nothing but plagiarism. I mean there is barely enough creativity in here to fill a bottle cap.
You had a great opportunity and you blew it.
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/28/2012
cant wait to read more im really liking the direction that this story is going please keep working on it
| Clearhorse chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
yeah so i was trying to read this and it sounds like a good story but it's a bit rough. I'd suggest going back through and revising it a little bit, it seems to me as if you are trying to hard. or not hard enought.