|Reviews for Feeding the Wolves|
| Lawsy89 chapter 42 . 3/16
| bookjunkie2010 chapter 42 . 3/12
I randomly found this a few weeks ago and really came to like it. It is well written and how Harli is written in is great. Not a lot of oc's are. I love Harli and her character growth into a badass. That we actually get to see it progress, unlike with Carol. Who in season 4 has a completely different attitude than in season 3. With no hint at it happening unlike with the others.
I am looking forward to how you go about the coming up chapters, especially on who tried to kill Harli. I don't think Daryl will just forgive Carol, if it was her like in the show. I don't think any of the original group would, that would be a much bigger betrayal than just the other two were. But you have two people involved instead of one and the voice was familiar, so am quite curious. Another one would be when he leaves with Beth. He is so protective of Harli, especially now that I don't think he will let her leave his side at all. I mean, even with her being sick and shot he didn't leave her behind. I also don't think she would leave his side either, so maybe they both leave with Beth? If not, I still I don't think he would react the same with her like in the show. He has Harli, who already gave him hope and what not. So getting all close and depressed over Beth I don't see happening.
Oh and if you are worried about this becoming too long, way not just put the seasons in different stories? Like season 3 would be Feeding the Wolves 3, FTW: The Prison, or something? With that ending chapter after they came back from Woodbary, I thought that would have been the end and I would have to look for the squeal. The same when I read the part where they found Harli half dead after the farm. What Daryl said at the end would have been a perfect cliff hanger.
Anyway am so looking forward to reading more and you did a great job with this.
| Khaylie chapter 42 . 3/8
I almost didn't believe my eyes when I saw you'd updated this story! I have waited so long and almost gave up but now you're finally back! My favorite fanfic is back! Harli and Daryl is back! This is so awesome.
Great chapter btw! Loaded with action and Daryl being Daryl. And I really think you should give yourself more credit than that, your writing has always and always will be great! Thank you for this!
I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
| xXEndlessImaginationXx chapter 42 . 3/6
Finally I'm all caught up with this story! I just know the whole part where they're split up is coming soon and I can't wait to see your take on it with Harli added into the mix (:
| Bluemane chapter 42 . 3/4
Good to see ya back, and in the full flow of things! Your writing skills don't seem to have diminished, and this is as good as I remember! Was a nice surprise to see this in the inbox, and hopefully, I'll see more!
| jeanf chapter 42 . 3/3
Oh man! So happy to see you're back! Yaaaay! And you picked one of my favorite scenes. Aggressive daryl...that chest bump with bob was just crazy! And protective of harli too. Heheheh
Can't wait for more chapters! Hope you are updating the dirt and roses story too. Love that one as well
| this moment is stardust chapter 42 . 3/3
I came across this story sometime last week and enjoyed it so much! You are an amazing writer and I love how you've included Harli in the storyline without her taking over someone else's storyline (which I see often in OC works). I was bummed when I got to the end and saw it hadn't been updated for a long while but followed it anyway in hopes it would be updated and I'm so glad I did! So happy you got the chance to update because this is probably one of my favorite TWD stories I've come across! Can't wait for the next chapter, you're writing is amazing.
| xXx Tinkies xXx chapter 42 . 3/3
Great chapter! Keep up the fantastic work! Please continue a.s.a.p.! Take care and have a great rest of the week! :)
| Wynter S. Komen chapter 42 . 3/3
WHOA! Welcome back! Missed ya :-)
| PadfootCc chapter 42 . 3/3
So excited for the update! I love Harli and Daryl!
| DarylDixon'sLover chapter 42 . 3/3
This was a great chapter
| Avide chapter 41 . 1/31
Harli's an impulsive badass!
thanks for posting your story and I hope you keep writing, even if it's something entirely different!
| Ace chapter 41 . 10/25/2014
UPDATE THIS. I EFFING LOVE IT.
| Savvy0X chapter 41 . 10/24/2014
Love, love, love it! Noticed you haven't updated in a while though :( hope its not permanent because I'm totally obsessed with this story right now. It has been amazing and an absolute pleasure to see your storytelling and writing improve over the course of the story. Your character building is amazing as well. You've illustrated the characters growth and evolution SO well. I'm absolutely riveted. Please update soon!
| booboobethan chapter 41 . 9/15/2014
more chapters please xx