Reviews for The Beholder
Zuzanny chapter 5 . 1/22/2013
i really enjoyed this fic.
ElsaFrozen chapter 5 . 9/16/2012
Very interesting. I like how you showed Puck's point of view in these episodes.
shadowwriter01 chapter 5 . 6/5/2012
Interesting chapter.
PeaceLightVictory chapter 5 . 6/1/2012
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Poor Puck!

Not fair at all. That scene in the show always fascinated me. I love how you wrote it.
Anon chapter 5 . 5/31/2012
I liked this chapter. I liked of Puck's inner thoughts - how he was terrifed of Oberon, but didn't let it show on the outside. Great job!
Anon chapter 4 . 5/30/2012
Yay, a new chapter!

Just … just don't kill him with iron or anything, all right? He may be a pompous jackass, but he's still …

Still what?
James Birdsong chapter 4 . 5/26/2012
Good. Yay it is excellent.
Sonar chapter 4 . 5/26/2012
Nicely done.
Page-Mistress chapter 4 . 5/24/2012
Here's an idea for you.

Technically, it's not looking back if he sees them in the reflection from a window.
CMR Rosa chapter 4 . 5/24/2012
Another good chapter.
Anon chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
"…Thailog was killed in the Clone Wars."

Yeah, sure. Okay, so it's a Star Wars reference. Whatever, it still works.

And then … instead of handing it over, he simply shook it out of the pouch and let it fall to the ground.

Son of a …!

He let out a string of obscenities in language that hadn't been spoken for thousands of years...

Amazingly funny!
Bookwyrm chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
Totally love your story! I especially liked Puck's point of view during Goliath's 'dream.'

"Oh yes, the sun. Can you see it, Goliath? It's beautiful."

Wow. I deserve an Emmy for this. Or an Oscar. Or something.

Hilarious!

Wonder how Puck will react to Alexander when he's born.

Keep up the good work!
James Birdsong chapter 3 . 5/13/2012
Excellent third chapter.
shadowwriter01 chapter 3 . 5/7/2012
Great chapter. Very good is the part about the illusions Puck put on Goliath from his p.o.v.
CMR Rosa chapter 3 . 5/6/2012
Great chapter, everyone was in character.
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