|Reviews for When Lead Over the Edge|
| Erika Peterson chapter 8 . 7/10
Woah! I love it! I really liked the darkness on chapter 7 and the kisses on chapter 8, they're so... *fangirling* I have not enough words to describe them. I find the plot very interesting, so I'll be waiting for the incoming fights and for the kisses of course hahaha. Keep it up!
| The Glorious Lich King chapter 8 . 4/29
Nice to see another chapter, Great work. I'm not to big on the whole gender bent thing from AT. Its cool and all but the original characters seem to come down to earth more.
Keep it up friend!
| The Nephilim King Michael chapter 8 . 4/29
Pure emotion and job on chapters 7-8
And finally marcy and finn kissed as their confession to eachother x3 and pure love between them and between fi and marsh..
And have feel fi will forgive finn in the long run as bro and sis..
But wonder what the game plan is now for the 4 as they face the trouble to come...
| The Nephilim King Michael chapter 5 . 3/11
pure emotion drama and job on chapters 3-5
and after finding out I know fi would forgive too.. even if she doesn't Marcy,jake, and possibly Marshall would talk to her and stand up for Finn bc he never knew...
but got feel after Finns commitment tonight gb gonna talk to fi.. and Marcy gonna sleep with Finn tonight and talk to him :)
and remember back few years ago when read 1st few chapters got into them x3
| Chaoscythe chapter 5 . 3/11
Great story so far, hope to see more
| Yoruko Rhapsodos chapter 5 . 3/11
Yay for fiolee And here's to hoping that Martin gets what's coming to him.
| GangstahPikachu chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Great for a start, sadly this is very short.
| h.m.j chapter 3 . 12/4/2012
this chapter was awesome...but i think fionna and finn should fall in love.
that would be algebraic dont u think :P
| Rose394 chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
please update! that is so perfect! very nicely written :)
| SAVIOR OF HYRULE chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
time is cool.
| Lynn chapter 3 . 3/27/2012
Vary kool story and I like how you made it start off can't wait for the next one post soon
| notalivezombie chapter 3 . 3/24/2012
| dickory5 chapter 3 . 3/23/2012
so...marshall and marcy are brothers?
update soon !
| notalivezombie chapter 2 . 3/22/2012
I like the direction.
| dickory5 chapter 2 . 3/20/2012
oh! marcie and marshall!
to favs ;)