Reviews for MapleStory: Warrior Brothers
iamadeadperson chapter 17 . 7/8/2012
:O Who's gonna win?

And... NOOOOOO! You HAVE to continue this story! It's funny, and entertaining!
iamadeadperson chapter 6 . 7/8/2012
iAmTheTot chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
It was a pretty interesting opening. Not terrible, certainly not terrible. I kind of agree with another reviewer that the battle sequence could have used more gusto, more description.

Other than that you actually seem to display a good understanding of the language, I only noticed a very small handful of spelling and grammatical errors but hey, we're all human.
Callidora-Malfoy chapter 9 . 4/14/2012
Can't wait for the next chapter. How could you leave it there? ;)
Callidora-Malfoy chapter 8 . 4/14/2012
OMG. I hope team nine don't fall into the trap! On to the next chapter!
Callidora-Malfoy chapter 7 . 4/14/2012
Nice reference to Pokemon. :D
Callidora-Malfoy chapter 6 . 4/14/2012
Callidora-Malfoy chapter 5 . 4/14/2012
My favourite chapter yet. It was a nice length and written well.
Callidora-Malfoy chapter 4 . 4/14/2012
Fun update.
Callidora-Malfoy chapter 3 . 4/14/2012
LOL. Nice chapter progression.
Callidora-Malfoy chapter 2 . 4/14/2012
Nice dialogue. I like how you don't overdescribe things.
Callidora-Malfoy chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
Interesting beginning.
sdkbjnrosnbdflkndl chapter 7 . 3/28/2012
Pokemon reference! FTW! Been reading this story for awhile now.
Zerhai Dragonspirit chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Ok first off I have never seen or played maple story so it is hard for me to relate to it, your fighting scenes are a bit awkward, and honestly the way you used the lines to break it up was confusing as well. Your descriptions are okay, though they could use a bit of work, the whole chapter feels a bit choppy as a whole. Though it gives enough at the end of the chapter for me to somewhat read the next chapter. Though my confusion with it stops me.
blooopen chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
that was a decent filler chapter (:
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