|Reviews for Win Some, Lose Some|
| Team Marylou chapter 67 . 3/2
| Team Marylou chapter 66 . 3/2
Clapping...what a beautiful awakening in Edward!
Runs to read next chapter...as Edward carries Bella up the stairs...into the BEDROOM...
| Team Marylou chapter 65 . 3/2
The anticipation is nerve wracking!
Your writing is amazing...how you bring out the emotions so distinctly for each character!
Bella Chocolate Cake Sex Lucky Edward
| Team Marylou chapter 64 . 3/2
TONIGHT is the Night!
SEX at last.
Edward's shopping trip for condoms was priceless! Of course, someone had to see him buying the box of 40 ribbed condoms...thank God it wasn't Charlie!
| Team Marylou chapter 63 . 3/2
I have a feeling they will be living together before too long.
Love these two together...so sweet and caring.
| Team Marylou chapter 61 . 3/2
Oh...Drunk-ward enjoying that red cup with fruit punch with his shirt off no less! Haha!
Keep eating those chips cause he's going to have a helluva hangover!
A graduation to remember !
| Team Marylou chapter 59 . 3/2
"God, THAT was awesome."
Yes, indeed...and now Bella is satisfied too!
| Team Marylou chapter 57 . 3/1
Are you sure the book isn't called "She CUMS First." haha!
Okay...that was awesome and believable for their next step towards sex. Gosh...hope he doesn't freak out when he has to be the thruster!
| Team Marylou chapter 56 . 3/1
"I wanted her...now."
| Team Marylou chapter 54 . 3/1
"There was a little piece of paper..."
Hmmmmm...that reminds me...what about that Lotto ticket?!
Edward could take care of Alice IF he had the funds.
| Team Marylou chapter 53 . 3/1
"You're supposed to give her a ring, not a watch."
| Team Marylou chapter 51 . 3/1
So sweet how innocently Edward explores Bella's body...wondering what she expects...and how far he is able to go for the moment. Beautiful.
| Team Marylou chapter 49 . 3/1
I'm clapping right along with them!
| Team Marylou chapter 46 . 3/1
Even better...ARREST Newton on Attempted Rape, Cocaine Possession and Assault.
Book 'Em Charlie!
Edward is my Hero.
| Team Marylou chapter 45 . 3/1
There are NO Fukin words for the RAGE I feel "reading about an attempted rape"...it absolutely SICKENS me to even imagine this vile, inhumane act of brutality.
I am so proud of Edward...heartbroken for Bella.
May those pigs rot in jail !
Guess ASS-newton won't be bothering Edward in school anymore.
Excellent writing...my heart is pounding out of my chest.