Reviews for May the Spell Be Unbroken
TheHatterJPGR chapter 13 . 5/9/2012
You had nice ideas, but some of your phrasing didn't make sense. The one that bothered me was when you said Emma still had her sword leveled when just before you said that she dropped on the ground. There were a few more grammatical errors too, but overall, I liked your thoughts.
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 11 . 5/7/2012
Poor Belle
TheHatterJPGR chapter 11 . 5/7/2012
I'm rather confused now... I hope you clear up how Rumplestiltskin died walking away with her spirit when she's alive. Good job though!
Firestone Piper chapter 10 . 5/7/2012
awesome!
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 10 . 5/6/2012
GREAT chapter! Por Grama thinkng HEnnry was dead , YIu have Gramahdown perfectly! I wamnt more!
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 9 . 5/6/2012
Yy! he's allive!
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 8 . 5/6/2012
as it GRaham who tookn him?
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 7 . 5/6/2012
HEnnnry?
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 6 . 5/6/2012
He's dead?
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 5 . 5/6/2012
POOR Hennry! the Whoever ity it is going to use HEnnry as a destaction?
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 4 . 5/6/2012
HIstory repeats it'self
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 3 . 5/6/2012
BEauiful cn see it happening This way! THe power Rush Scared People Emma ESPIECALLY
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 2 . 5/6/2012
That's him believing till the bitter end!
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Great Start!
Snow Whitex Prince Charming chapter 8 . 4/18/2012
YAY! GRAHAM'S BACK!
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