|Reviews for With a little help|
| staretoile chapter 10 . 1/1/2014
nice story. Cool idea with the strands of magic that Harry sees between himself and the different
wards. Funny that Tom and the minister have the same goals!
| DarkenedRose24 chapter 10 . 5/13/2013
-is confused- wait... what happens next? There is a huge cliff hanger here and i don't really understand what's going on. It is a good story. But you just cut it off in the middle... i really would like to know what happens next.
| Quantumphysica chapter 5 . 4/11/2013
Oooh, I love these slightly deus-ex-machina events xD
| Zaidee chapter 10 . 3/16/2013
Loved reading this. When you do get to doing a sequel; if you do, can you post an alert in this story so that I and any others that want to read it, know that it has been started. Please? I look forward to reading it, if you do begin a sequel and i am awear of it.
| victoria32 chapter 10 . 3/9/2013
Awesome story just wondering if u r writing a sequel because this story is one of my favorites so keep writing ur a wonderful author
| Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 10 . 9/23/2012
Pft. Honestly, I can't say that this was even a full story so there really isn't much of a way to have a sequel. I mean, you haven't resolved the current conflicts. To make a sequel, current conflicts must be resolved, and then a new conflict must occur near the end to cause a sequel to be created. Otherwise, this story is just one story with multiple parts with different titles.
I wish to make it known that I know that this is mostly my opinion but it's also how its most commonly done with real books and even other fanfictions. The whole point of the review function is for readers to help, right?
Well, I hope this helps somehow. Not too sure how it will, but I hope your story becomes less like a cutoff sentence and more like a complex one.
Thank you for your time!
| ForXXXXSake chapter 10 . 9/17/2012
This was rather good, i enjoyed it. I am looking forward to the sequel. :)
| Zale potter chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
This is good sounds like a powerful harry and evil or dark harry i like this so far!
| egwolf65 chapter 10 . 8/19/2012
| jazmynkim chapter 10 . 8/7/2012
| Priestess of Silvanus chapter 10 . 7/23/2012
this is the end. . . but its in the middle of the story? did you just get tired of writting?
| Valentina Alexandrea Sparrow chapter 10 . 6/23/2012
| SeaBreeze2Ga chapter 10 . 5/31/2012
Great story, very well done, can't wait to see what you do in the sequal, keep up the great work, can't wait to read more.
| DevilsDarkKitsune chapter 10 . 5/28/2012
| Wind Wolf 1701 chapter 10 . 5/10/2012
This is a good story but it feels like only half a story, I hope the rest of it comes soon. I want to see what happens when they take over Hogwarts and bring down Dumbles! WW.