|Reviews for Aftermath|
| Edhla chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
That last line in particular was really powerful, in its simplicity... you didn't overdo it with the descriptions or pathos and just let the story tell itself :)
I did feel that the part about the barn being blasted apart and the animals dying inside it was more summarised than described, and by just adding a little more (I know this fic is two years old :D) you could really ramp this up into a striking little piece.
Thank you for writing x
| Blue-Inked Frost chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Cool! Lovely to see you posting this here. I remember it on deviantArt I think, I remember the detail of blasting away the barn. And I liked the mental image of the haunted abandoned house with screams of grief scaring people away. :)