Reviews for Gone Forever
DoctorHarryEmrysWatson chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Why Sherlock! WHY!

Why must you make me cry like so :'(

Well… Imma write you back in my life through the page!

That was really good Sherlock!

Brilliant in fact!

Really, brilliant :)

Keep writing :D

~John
M. D. Jensen chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Hope you got a good mark! I certainly enjoyed reading it. I would've liked to see a bit of expansion in the last scene between John and Greg. I don't think it was necessarily OOC for Greg to comfort John in the way that he did, but I do think it needed a bit more build-up to work properly. Anyway, thanks for posting!