Reviews for clearing the air
singingcaro chapter 9 . 9/16/2012
I'm sorry for not having reviewed... I just wanted to say your story is fantastic! Take care )
zc chapter 7 . 4/7/2012
pls update soon!
Guest chapter 7 . 4/6/2012
OMG! Who the heck is this stalker? What will happen between the gang will the guys catch him and bet him up? What is going to happen between Bella n Edward? Eeeek cant wait to find out please continue the story.
darkcutey chapter 6 . 4/4/2012
loved it cant wait fir next chapter please update soon!
Fan chapter 6 . 4/4/2012
Uhh...actually i wz looking forward much for some sensuality between edward & bella...honestly i wud enjoy that the most
darkcutey chapter 5 . 3/27/2012
Omg omg omg whats going on loving the story and this chapter did not like cliff hanger but loved it at the say time crazy right can't wait for next chapter !
pmk kelly chapter 5 . 3/26/2012
Loved it
Guest chapter 5 . 3/26/2012
U r evil! I HATE cliffhangers so much sometimes...ugh anyway before I go off on a rant I luv ur story keep writing
pinky chapter 5 . 3/26/2012
it was amazing..loved e b interaction
bornonhalloween chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
TWEETY! Way to go and take that plunge, girl!

There's so much good in here- 'Though the other girls had no problems talking to people outside the group, Bella somehow found it both uncomfortable and unnecessary.'-this really paints a picture of both who she is and how she feels about it.

so boredom was never in their company-lovely

Edward misunderstood her fear as her rejection and walked away without a second look in her direction. -Wow, there it is. You really gave us the whole thing so beautifully in the third paragraph. Kudos! That would've taken me 30 chapters!

he was here, and he was looking at her.-so nice.

Yes, I think you should definitely continue. Sounds like you've got a story to tell, and you're doing an admirable job at it!

Smiles back to you, Tweety. I hope writing will be your companion when you need it to be.


pinky chapter 4 . 3/23/2012
cat fight was good
pinky chapter 3 . 3/23/2012
i liked Rose's dialogue to Mike n Tyler
pinky chapter 2 . 3/23/2012
shopping with alice! n her instructions.. lol
pinky chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
I dont read third person pov fics normally but i liked this
pmk kelly chapter 4 . 3/23/2012
Loved it I wish this story was rated m coz I would love a steemy lemon from both of them
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