Reviews for The Fashion Consultant
SoLongNotGoodnight chapter 30 . 6/11/2012
Awesome chapter! Kinda sad that you're going to be taking a break soon but I understand. I love this story and I can't wait to continue reading it :)
cherryorpeach chapter 16 . 4/27/2012
Yes! You've updated up to chapter 16! (:

Really enjoyed reading. I love Annie's character; she just gets better and better.

I love Jason. He is able to bring out Annie's sensitivity. She's protective of TJ and NCIS but that strong bond between mom and son totally got me.

Keep at it! (:
msgemgem chapter 12 . 4/10/2012
Again wasn’t a huge fan of annie in this chapter - she is so distant and untrusting of the team it’s a real shame for me as I know how hard she worked to gain their trust and how much she wants to be a part of their family - the fact that she seems to have dropped all loyalty to the team just because an old friend came back kind of makes me feel like maybe she cant be trusted - if she can drop them so easily now after all they have been through what’s to say she wont up and leave callen should they ever actually get together? It would break his heart.

For this reason and a few others I have, not to mention a few things that I have noticed that I can foresee becoming a problem for me in the future I have decided to bow out now - but I just want you to know that the reasons I am going to stop reading this fic have nothing to do with your writing or anything like that - there are just something’s that I don’t enjoy reading and I can tell that this is heading down that path. Bt seriously good luck with this fic and I hope people start reviewing more, you have written a great fic and it deserves some kind of recognition for all of the hard work that you clearly put into it xxx
msgemgem chapter 11 . 4/10/2012
Wow and finally we see just how attracted to callen that annie is - and might I say she looked mighty hot - are you trying to give poor callen a heart attack ? Lol

And hetty and hef ? Omg so freaking funny.

I can feel that they are getting closer to being together - im hoping so anyway lol - although I do appreciate you taking the time to build up ytheir relationship so that when they do get together its built on something more solid than just lust.

Loving this xxx
msgemgem chapter 9 . 4/10/2012
Wow and finally we see just how attracted to callen that annie is - and might I say she looked mighty hot - are you trying to give poor callen a heart attack ? Lol

And hetty and hef ? Omg so freaking funny.

I can feel that they are getting closer to being together - im hoping so anyway lol - although I do appreciate you taking the time to build up ytheir relationship so that when they do get together its built on something more solid than just lust.

Loving this xxx
msgemgem chapter 10 . 4/10/2012
It was so good to start with although that whole sister thing has got me worried that you will be brininging her in to the fic at some point - im not really a fan of multiple oc’s and inevitably multiple couples - and then that whole thing with that guy and now she planning on leaving ? Not sure exactly here this is going but im going to stick with it and see.
Readin-and-Writin chapter 3 . 4/9/2012
Just started reading this story and I'm really liking it so far. I'm surprised dthat its not getting more reviews! Good job and please keep sriting :)
msgemgem chapter 8 . 3/26/2012
loved it yet again - girl you are good

i love that callen is so jealous when it comes to her

and kensi picking up on his feelings shows just how obvious he is lol

can not ait til they are a couple i swear im on the edge of my seat waiting for it.

cant wait to read more
msgemgem chapter 7 . 3/26/2012
loved it - i loved that it was from callens point of view - i loved that callen was so hot for annie (it was truly funny for me lol) and i love that he was jealous that the good doctor was attracted to her.

love sams part in that whole chapter also - story just getting better for me
msgemgem chapter 6 . 3/26/2012
I love how callen immediately went to Annie’s side - as though he knew that she would need her .

And the scene in the dressing area was just so precious - those two are going to go the distance when they finally become a couple I can just tell. The respect and admiration they have for each other is just so plain to see and I can tell it will only get more intensifying as they get closer.

And I adored the whole scene of callens stabbing (not that I like that he got stabbed just the event surrounding it lol) annies reaction as great - I usually hate it when people start blaming themselves when something happens to another - but with annie I could tell that she genuinely felt guilty and wasn’t just trying t make the situation abut her - like I usually feel most of those situations go - so great job with that.

And amazing scene at the end with her telling him why she needs him - although I think she needs him bcause she loves him - its far far to early for any of that , and even though its obvious to us reading it - its usually the two people in love that take the longest to realise it lol.

Really great chapter
msgemgem chapter 5 . 3/25/2012
such a great chapter - so much emotion in the writing it was amazing.

a little shocked to find that she has been maried twice - that woman is going through husbands at an alarming rate lol.

and i usually dont like it when authrs write up song lyrics - i dont really see the point - but i get that it was important to that part of the story. so i didnt mind so much.

its amazing but i can already see the love between annie and callen - it really shos through.

p.s - it might take me a while to read and revie the other chapters but i am getting there - and thank you for the name change to annie i feel like the story flows much better now without that whole vixen thing.
msgemgem chapter 4 . 3/21/2012
ooohhhh he's already thinking about a future with anne - wow that boy has it bad lol.

cant wait for them to be an actual couple - so great to see a callen/ofc fic on here.

update soon - although i am ging away for a few weeks so if i dont review straight away please dont think i am ignoring you and i will read and review as soon as i get back.
msgemgem chapter 3 . 3/21/2012
i loved her and deeks they are funny together - and i love how easy she fits in with them all
msgemgem chapter 2 . 3/21/2012
another great chapter - i love the chemistry that she and callen already have.

still not liking the whole vixen thing - im sorry i just think its a stupid thing to do - to have people call you vixen.
msgemgem chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
good stat it seems like it could be a great story

not sure about the whole vixen thing - i dnt really like it when people give themselves nicknames , especially ones like that seems stupid somehow.

look forward to reading more though
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