Reviews for Can you see Me?
harleymaria chapter 2 . 3/20/2012
wow that was really good i liked how u added his father in the story ) great job
thetvgeneral chapter 2 . 3/19/2012
This is a really good start to what I can tell is going to be a great story. Please come back when you can. I'm anxious to see what happens next.
pmk kelly chapter 2 . 3/19/2012
Really liked it please update asap
Twilight Wrighter chapter 2 . 3/19/2012
Hi, I really like the idea, really like it, but one suggestion? If I may, your um... story grammar, is a bit mixed up as well as the Dialog.. Sorry, I'm only trying to help.
harleymaria chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
wow thats so sad i love ur story
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
PLEASE KEEP WRITING! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
PLEASE KEEP WRITING! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
pmk kelly chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I am adding this story with the hope that u update quickly and u write longer chapters I don't like short chapter stories if it takes longer to load a chapter than it does to read it I have no interest in so please do longer chapters