|Reviews for Life of a Swan|
| Kasey Jones chapter 6 . 5/6
Idea is good. I don't know if you have redone chapters 1-4 yet, if you have they are still very hard to read.
| Bridgy chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Good plot! Besides the Typos (which are always fixable) you have a pretty good story going here. Keep it up!
| justaislinn1 chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Ummmmm. No punctuation makes it difficult to read and takes away from the story. I really enjoy the plot though:)
| katiebugladybug chapter 2 . 5/28/2012
Really hard to read, don't know who is saying what as you don't really separate them out correctly.
| cullenmeadow chapter 3 . 3/27/2012
Definitely keep going, I need to see how you're going to reunited them ... If that's your plan LOL. :). Thanks.
| bizarre.ponies chapter 2 . 3/19/2012
You need an editor really badly. There is absolutely no punctuation which makes it difficult and confusing to try to read. I really like your story though. If you need someone to edit/pre-read before you post, I'd be willing to go over it :)
| SelinaShadow chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
OMG absolutetly love it! cant wait to see what you come up with next! its awesome!