Reviews for On Paper We're a Disaster
HazylShy chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
I love it. I think this would be a pretty accurate situation; Draco kissing her to make her be quiet. Very nice. :)
Writey Starkid chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
HAHAHA YEEEESSSSSS! Best parts: 1) Luna yelling. 2) "That damn Luna! She's a closeted sexual deviant!"


GredandForgeforever chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Loved it! I also imagined that Draco would need to take extra lengths to shut her up :) Very cute!
Hug-The-Antihero chapter 1 . 3/14/2012

I really enjoyed your oneshot, and I know you probably won't respond to this (skimmed over your profile) but I just wanted to let you know that the only concrit I have is that "can it" and "freaking" are American phrases, so I picked you off as an American author from about 2 lines in, and I don't mind American authors or slang at all, but you were writing about English characters, so it kind of didn't fit. Does that make sense? I guess it's just that they never use Americanisms in the books so it was noticeable here. Make what you like of this, if you like your style feel free to ignore everything I said ) just thought I would mention it. (Also I don't profess to be a good writer myself so...) Your story was really good though, and I loved the way Luna yelled at Malfoy P