|Reviews for Nobody ever cares|
| TheFlowersWillFall chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Good job Aimee. But Fanfiction is fan fiction . This is a made up story right ? This site is for when you like a show/book/movie .. But your story is good.
| newnamenoname chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Hi, Aimee I just got done reading and you told me to leave an honest review so here I am.
I have no idea what show, or book "On Writing" is, but I really liked this piece. You were descriptive, but maybe a bit to vague; I, myself, understood that she fell but some other people unless they read it over a view times would have to assume what happened and sometimes we are wrong on what the author is attempting to convey. So, maybe just a bit more wording on the actions of the characters.
*Unbold your writing, it isn't meant to all be bolded unless it is needed which in this case it wasn't.
*Capitalization is important!
Also, you might want a beta to help you. I even have one. :*, good luck!