|Reviews for Stars|
| Endles chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I really like your intepretation of these two. :)
I had some trouble with the very last line, though. It was kind of hard to understand at first, or maybe I'm just stupid... Well, instead of the way it is now, I would've written it like this:
"Maybe someday, as simply as he'd taken my hand to lead me into a sky filled with stars, he would kiss me."