Reviews for Sink or Swim
usaypotato chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Wow! The suspense, the building of tension, superb. My favorite, "manually collecting air into his lungs..." A fabulous story.
Kat chapter 2 . 4/3/2012
I like it. Nxt Chapter please.
kirifox chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Awesome, excellent, twisted, exposed, tortured...more please!
OcSickGirl chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
ok, i get that jasper is in love with Edward but If Edward had ever shown any interest I would be like ok cool maybe he needs a little push to let himself go and explore but this seemed to be completely one sided. he's lucky Edward didn't throw him out the
chartwilightmom chapter 1 . 3/15/2012

you certainly touches on my inner emo teenager

from start to finish

i wonder if you will continue this, you certainly left it wide open to do so

thanks for submitting and good luck on the contest!