Reviews for Taming Two Hearts Or Breaking One Adopted Version
L.J. Murder-Root chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
Grammatical errors aside
... damn, with one chapter you've successfully hooked me.
:) great opening.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/23/2014
Your a narusaku fan aren't you? -.-'
Guest chapter 15 . 10/26/2013
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ajrockstarr chapter 3 . 10/20/2013
So far I like the story but try to fix so,e of the typos other then that it's great
UpYours13 chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
TOO MANY RUN-ONS. TOO MANY SPELLING ERRS. Other than that, overall, pretty good
Dan chapter 7 . 10/9/2013
Sorry dude. Absolutely awful spelling and grammar have made this absolutely un-readable. This is as far as I got.
Boy of darkness chapter 20 . 10/8/2013
Lucky naruto
LolaTheSa chapter 5 . 10/8/2013
And,what the duck has,sakura done in canon, nshe is worse then hinata.

Hinata love for naruro is the reason naruto is still alive, what do you mean she is selfish abd uncaring? You obviously have not did your history on her character, and it is making me mad.

This is post war, naruto plus the kyuubi saved everyone, so the fact they will still deny him things is just a major no no, which you ate obviously overlooking as well.

Goodbye.
Guest chapter 20 . 10/7/2013
Feel sorry for neji and the others
AngryNarutoNerd chapter 4 . 10/7/2013
Naruto not getting a genin a team because some parents don't like the Kyuubi jinchuuriki to instruct their children is real BULLSHIT, at this point Naruto is the fucking hero of the Elemental Nations, parents would be figthing with teeth and nails for the chance to have Naruto training their children.

Even more you made Tsunade those parents bitch. As the Hokage those kids are HER fucking soldiers and can put them under the command of whoever she thinks fit.

I think that it was cheap and retarded way to add some unnecesary angst to the fic and force the scene between Naruto and Sakura.
gamelover41592 chapter 20 . 10/7/2013
that was good still going to do the birthday chapter?
Boy of darkness chapter 19 . 10/6/2013
will it be hinata
gamelover41592 chapter 19 . 10/6/2013
good job
hydroshinobi chapter 19 . 10/6/2013
Great story! Really like it. Hope the next naru/saku/hina marvel crossover is one with the venom symbiote!
Guest chapter 19 . 10/6/2013
you still have grammar issues even in these new chapters, for instance on the very last paragraph: Sakura didn't "saw" Hinata.
The correct way should be: Sakura didn't "see" hinata.
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