Reviews for Banishment
Guest chapter 7 . 6/10/2015
I like the lore you made for the reason behind Giratina's two forms (because we all knew "changes in gravity" was a really lame excuse for an explanation). the ending made me really sad though, seeing that Dialga is ny favorite pokemon and Giratina rankes in my top 10. I think that maybe you should have put another version of the ending fron Dialga's view so we can see how hee took the banishment. I hope you make a sequel because both Dialga and Giratina do get the ability to go to earth at some point and I don't want Dialga to be alone for all eternity. Also, Ho-oh is a jerk. I think a certain green dragon should do a little something about that. maybe burn a certain tower.
Jorssen 2 chapter 6 . 5/11/2015
As I was saying from an unfinished sentence, this version of Arceus wouldn't know what fatherhood id even if it bit him in his tailed ass.
Jorssen 2 chapter 7 . 5/10/2015
This version of Arceus may be the all-knowing creator of existence, but he is a TERRIBLE father. he wouldn't know what fatherhood is He never gave a damn about Giratina or her problems. He wouldn't even help his own DAUGHTER in her time of need when she was being picked and tormented on by Ho-Oh, and by her own so-called "brother" Palkia, who I might add was never Giratina's brother. He always hated Giratina just for existing. If Palkia is older than Giratina in this story. Then as the older brother, rather than condemning her for her existence, he should have followed Dialga's example and looked out for her. But he didn't, instead he kept tormenting her, and played a sick joke of using his Spatial powers to change the density of the wall to the point of Giratina being unable to phase through it, and having to be forced to destroy said walls just to get out, and then talking about for everyone to hear and turning Giratina into a pariah, which led to Giratina's banishment from the Human World in the first place. It just shows on how much of horrible brother he is. He (Palkia) gleefully ruined Giratina's life, and he doesn't care, and he is not sorry at all for what he did to both Giratina and Dialga. He doesn't want to own up to what he did and instead just wants to lie by saying that Giratina caused so much destruction just to save his own sorry hide. Dialga was more of a brother to Giratina than Palkia, who ALWAYS hated Giratina.

And don't get me started on this stories version of Ho-Oh, who is a selfish, jealous, narcissistic bitch who like Palkia hates Giratina just for merely existing. If Giratina wanted to, she could've easily have kicked Ho-Oh's stuck-up ass for all of the crap that she put her through. And let's get back to Arceus on how much of a terrible father he is. He easily loses his patience with Giratina, doesn't even bother to try to help her in her time of need, and doesn't even try to listen to her. Instead all he did was to brutally insult her and yell at her by saying that she has been nothing but anti-social and unwilling to be part of a "greater collective" or whatever, what greater collective? He didn't even try to help her when she was being picked on, and when she was trying to get divine retribution against Palkia alongside Dialga for all of the crap that he (Palkia) had put her through, he (Arceus) brutally screamed at her and viciously insulted her by calling her anti-social and took Palkia's side completely. And when Dialga was trying to be fair and comprehensive by telling Arceus to listen to Giratina, Arceus viciously attacked Dialga by attacking him in his damaged shoulder. And when Giratina tried to attack him back in just retribution, Arceus gets all pissy about on how Giratina dared to attack him, he brutally attacked his own son Dialga when his only crime as to get him to listen to Giratina and hear her out. And when Giratina tried to get retribution against Arceus for attacking Dialga, Arceus plays the victim by whining about on how Giratina "dared to attack him" and nonchalantly ruins her life by banishing her into the reverse world just because of her "violence".

All and all this version of Arceus is just like the Titan Cronus. If anyone is familiar with Greek Mythology, then you will know that Cronus ate five of his kids (minus Zeus), expect Arceus never ate Giratina and kept her alive in his stomach. But he did treat her like dirt and emotionally and at the end, physically abused her and threw her into the reverse world for all of eternity for something that he, Ho-Oh, Palkia (the true antagonists of this story) did. I felt sorry for both Dialga and Giratina, their lives ruined by their so-called asshole "brother" Palkia, who doesn't want to own up to the shit he started, and just wants to lie and blame it on Giratina just to save his own sorry hide. And that evil bitch Ho-Oh. All and all this was a great story. And by the way, if anyone wants to sic their badass Pokémon on Ho-Oh, be careful, Ho-Oh is extremely powerful, and will not be easy to beat, but good luck in your battle against her. Heck, even I'm going to jump into the fray and do the same thing with my own Pokémon.
Guest chapter 7 . 6/26/2014
:'(
Poor giri
Giratina is my favorite dragon
Why arceus why?
DraconianPhilosopher chapter 7 . 1/23/2014
This is the best telling of the creation story I've read yet, will it have a sequel, it really leaves so much of a cliffhanger it almost requires one. please?

Forever Reading,
-Darkrai6543
NoXVZhuusox chapter 7 . 1/21/2014
Well, Arceus you may be the Creator of All, but you are definitely not a good father.

Will there be a sequel to this?
Shadow Amaterasu chapter 6 . 2/5/2013
I really like it. Good job.
NightFury3rs chapter 6 . 1/9/2013
great chapter! id have to say its my fav. so far.
DarkType87 chapter 5 . 11/27/2012
Hey Encyclopika i really enjoy this work im a big pokemon fan and honestly this is really intriguing. im new to this whole review thing, but as far as i can see, this is great.
Emodragonsprites chapter 5 . 10/22/2012
I love this story it is extremely well written and reading this I kinda want to sic my badass garchomp on Ho-oh.
Please update.
The Pk Guardian chapter 5 . 10/15/2012
Please continue! This is a great story and I (and those who simply don't post review but do read this) would love to see it finished! Keep up the good work!
Blue Ussain chapter 5 . 8/20/2012
Awwww Dialga and Giratina are so cute together :3.

Ho-Oh can go to hell.
TheLegacy79 chapter 5 . 7/23/2012
Im really enjoying this. Update soon please. The story is so attention grabbing. Honestly? This must be what high school is like for a girl. Im a guy so it is only my educated guess.
AlphaRidley chapter 5 . 7/15/2012
I think Giratina should be make and Dialga female...
AlphaRidley chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
Yay!...Took you long enough...
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