Reviews for Remembering
RivalsAreAllies chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Beautiful. I loved it. It was very true to the characters, and well-written.

There were a few grammatical and syntactical errors here and there, but it was never so much that it detracted my exceedingly excited enjoyment of this OneShot.

Great job.

Keep up the good work.

P.S. I loved the line: "…metal note: Go to Onyx." :)
firerwolf chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
A nice little story. It was short and simple, not too long or too complicated, which made it a nice read. I totally agree that if I'd owned Halo then Kelly would have stayed by John's side through the whole series. I only saw one typo, and that was the word metal instead of mental when he makes a mental note.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
DUDE WTF just kidding lol thos is really good you should make more :3