|Reviews for Remembering|
| RivalsAreAllies chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
Beautiful. I loved it. It was very true to the characters, and well-written.
There were a few grammatical and syntactical errors here and there, but it was never so much that it detracted my exceedingly excited enjoyment of this OneShot.
Keep up the good work.
P.S. I loved the line: "…metal note: Go to Onyx." :)
| firerwolf chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
A nice little story. It was short and simple, not too long or too complicated, which made it a nice read. I totally agree that if I'd owned Halo then Kelly would have stayed by John's side through the whole series. I only saw one typo, and that was the word metal instead of mental when he makes a mental note.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
DUDE WTF just kidding lol thos is really good you should make more :3