|Reviews for Death Within|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
| LuluCalliope chapter 7 . 6/28/2012
Uh-oh! Sharia's in trouble...and in a love triangle, it seems.
I love it when one sexy villain gets a romantic rival! It's so...tension-y! Great work!
| LuluCalliope chapter 6 . 6/28/2012
I don't know if I have looked into Osmosis Jones 2: The Enemy is Alive and Well. But I totally should!
Anyway, great work so far! I'm loving this story!
My only problem was actually with Thrax. He fell for Sharia a little too quickly, but I think that as long as he stays in character, he's totally fine.
Once again, great work!
| LuluCalliope chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
"Careful, I'm contagious."
GASP! That's Thrax's line! How dare you steal it! You put Sharia back in control this instant or...I am going to get very, very upset!
And I will write a review, telling you how very, very upset I am!
(Wow, that was pathetic...)
Anyway, great chapter!
| LuluCalliope chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Great start! However, I don't see why there was a need for a sequel to the original story. It seemed so short! Ah, well...it ended on a good cliffhanger, and I can't wait to read more!
| DarkraixCresselia chapter 6 . 3/21/2012
OMG, you read my story? Awesome :D Glad you liked it.
Also, I read all of your stories up to now, and love them. Love Sharia, love the way she turns into a virus, LOVE the way you write Thrax :3 Can't wait for more.