|Reviews for You Never Forget Your First|
| eloquentlyinsane chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Well done! Never thought of it this way before. Excellently rendered!
Tbh, this makes a lot more sense that all of Twilight, haha
| HalcyonSeasons chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
"He liked them fragile, remember?"
I bet someone could feel my chills from a mile away.
Oh my god, that was incredible. Totally wasn't what I expected. In all honesty, there was this thought going on in the back of my head at the beginning. It sounded a lot like, "Oh NO, this is another typical Bedward fic, all lovey-dovey with only a hint of angst." I avoid those kinds of stories like the plague.
But nope. This story isn't that in the least bit. It's better. Edward in canon has always seemed a bit creepy (I mean, who would he be if he wasn't, lol), but you played him up well - very well. It wasn't so ooc, either. You're good at balancing. In a different, less virginal version of Twilight, I can imagine this fitting right in.
Overall, great story. I liked the angst. I liked the voice. I liked the mood. The only thing I didn't like was how intricate it was; that, I loved.
| Tsaga99 chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
This is truly amazing and you should definitely change it from a one shot into a multi chapter fic. Like you could have edward and bella and make edward change around bella and he cannot bring himself to ever harm her in any way shape or form and he could change her in the future and stuff. Hopefully you'll do something like that... :)
| solena1 chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Hmm...I think, maybe the lack of reviews may come from the resistance of people wanting to see Edward with a sickness and serial tendencies. It basically denies every ounce of his nature.
| Igoogleeverything chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
A nicely written piece, not my usual read but enjoyed it.
| teamedward-slenderman chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
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| 4MeJasper chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
| Achlies chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
My god. I cannot believe this has so few reviews.
This is a stunning, beautiful piece of work. Horrifically dark without being overbearing. Angst with hints of self-deprecation.
Absolutely amazing. I am blown away by your writing.
| mad4hugh chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Great Darkward! Engaging, enticing and creepy! I like how you twisted - or should I say reinterpreted - the elements of the TwiSaga we love...
BTW: found your O/S from the Dark Edward Community add of your story to their "catalog".
| Tomboy Amy chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
oh my. its so dark and so interesting. loved. it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Very dark and interesting
| ohtobeyoung chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Complete? Really? Would like more.
| LMBB chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
That could be the creepiest, sociopathic Edward I've ever read. Ick. Scary!
| cheshirekat516 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Anbolutely, entertainingly diabolical. Loved every second of it.
| DredHedRed chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
I like this. You've captured the essence of the nature of the serial killer that is Cullen.