Reviews for Last Breath
RoyaisAwesome chapter 2 . 3/12/2016
it's like one of those long stories summarized into 2 chapters...
karona369 chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Ya know...Im still waiting for youre next chap...I know its hart to write a story but..come on!
I know that you want more you want more reviews you should updt more so we have something to reiew about (I know... I know... my English is not perfect..) Im waiting for youre next chap soo... dont abandon thus stury,I repiet- DONT ABANDON THIS STORY!
WordsThatKill chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
You should write the next chapter!

But make it longer, try and use more detail!

good Luck, I look forward to it! ;)
moonangel13 chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
rite when i was actually getting into it... i thought there were more chapters... please update i like it so far... though its short but good... please continue! XD
asdfghjjkl chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Too short. Way too short. Update?
KARONA-CHAN chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
plzzzzzzzz continue,youre plot is sooooooooooooo good!

im waiting for the next chap _
animegeek2010 chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
I love this. Please update.