|Reviews for Mass Effect: Order Upon Chaos|
| Wapiti chapter 10 . 2/26
Even though I liked Leviathan, I have to say that I enjoyed this more. Since ME1, I was excited to find out about the Reapers' origins and even Leviathan did not provide the depth I anticipated.
All the better when I find gems like this. I don't even dare hope for an update after seeing the last date this story was updated, but I can't complain because I'm thankful I got to read at least "most" of the Reapers' evolution.
Great job, favourited (and followed too, just in case:))
| The Wandering Reader chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
Now this is one of the best fics I have read about the reapers...
This is so EPIC!
| Partsu chapter 10 . 3/11/2013
You just made me sympathetic towards Reapers...
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/31/2013
Moar give me...holy crap I used that meme...Anyway this is fantastic and I cannot WAIT untill you get to the 'present' cycle or is it the last cycle. Either way keep it up.
| NonSolus chapter 10 . 1/20/2013
... BEYOND EPIC.
This is, I think, one of _the_ most mindfucking stories I've ever read in the Mass Effect universe.
And from Reaper perspective no less!
Proper Science Fiction with sensawunda, this.
Eagerly awaiting more mindblowing chapters about our favourite eldritch abominations from dark space!
| Cstan chapter 10 . 1/20/2013
I am in awe of this work. Your ideas of the origins and later fall from grace of the Reapers is novel and inspiring. Heh, I find it ironic that Harbinger, the "bad" guy, would resent the "Cycle of Destruction" the longest.
| I Can't Believe Prime Is Done chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
I know you'll probably never read this, but I just wanted you to know that this is the only fanfiction I don't consider a guilty pleasure. Let us know if you ever write a novel, and please update this whenever you feel ready.
| Tobias5 chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
This is a fantastic story. I can't wait until you bring it up to Mass Effect timeline., I'd love to read some of thier conversations about Shepard and that cycle.
| NeoDeus chapter 6 . 7/15/2012
This is absolutely incredible.
I honestly can't think of any criticism right now because just... wow. Absolutely fantastic story, fits perfectly with the spirit and lore of Mass Effect.
| Generic Anonymous Name chapter 10 . 5/23/2012
This is a great work of fiction which does an astoundingly good job of characterizing the Reapers, and even allows the reader to sympathize with them. (Not at all an unremarkable feat when working with Lovecraftian style alien horrors.)
That said, I'm a bit disappointed that we haven't seen more in-depth interactions between "the assembly" and the species they seek to preserve; I would have liked to more clearly see the different reactions of different "iterations," and perhaps attempts the assembly may have made to help civilizations without the end-all "preservation."
Regardless, it's your story, not mine, and it's still amazing. Not to mention thousands of times greater than the current canon explanation of the Reapers' existence. (We synthetics will kill you so you won't be killed by your own synthetics.)
| luk3us chapter 10 . 5/18/2012
Yeah see I like this story of how things over time get twisted and distorted until they become completely unrecognizable. Gives the 'Reapers' more depth and more I suppose more sympathetic? Instead of a few lines of we are your salvation through destruction (even though thats a great line).
| Jozern chapter 10 . 5/16/2012
And so we reach almost modern ME days. Keep it up Sudentor, looking for more especially Sovereign and Protheans/collectors parts.
| Jozern chapter 9 . 5/14/2012
Holy fuck droooool loving it!
| Empeorie chapter 9 . 5/14/2012
And so the final end of their coding. The naming of another platform, and the creation of synthetic machines to do their job. And so the reapers begin.
| The Straight Elf chapter 9 . 5/14/2012
This is great. And, in the absence of any explanation by BioWare, I accept this as canon.